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6-8 bars in length
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3-0 KO - or - First to 5
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4 Partcipants in R2,
Subsist vs Tramatik
& Mac vs. Domino
The winner of each battle goes into the finals
You must use at least one personal

Yo' It's Evident That This Punk-Is-Posin, Yeah You Take Shots But It's Cum-An-Colons/ (always talkin bout he's drunk)
It's No Wonder You Got Jump-With-Close-Fist Claimin You can Fight Well That Fuckin-Shows-It//
You're So-Bitch, Talkin Bout Bein "Labeled-A-Genius" When Ya Not Even Able-To-Enable-ingenious/
I'll Break-Him-With-Mean-Spits I'm Fatal Leave His Facial-A-Clean-Slit From The Razors-I-Swing-Wit//
What's Funny He Clames-This-Guy Been In The Streets Since Age-Of-Five Tryna Gain Street-Knowledge/
But The Fact Is I'll Maim-This-Guy Sever His Speach Like His Brain-Is-Fried An Can't Eat-Solids//
Now Ya Talkin Bout You Started Writin-At-Eight? Then Why You STILL Wack Dawg, You Needa Lock Ya Mic-In-a-Safe/
Cuz Truth Be Told You're Still Writin-The-Same Wack Shit You Was Prolly Writin-At-Eight//
An Dawg, You Can't Get Pussy At 16 Let Alone-At-Twelve/
The Only Way You "Might Possibly" Get Dome Is Sittin At Home Tryna Blow-Ya-Self//
Go Ahead An Reply, I'll Hit You Three-Four-Rounds Strap'n You With C4 Is The Only Way You'd Blow up In Three-Four-Towns/(Like Only Way He's Be Known In Three Four Towns)
I'd Go To The Circus If I wanted To See-More-Clowns, Fuck You Homo Leave Ya Mother Fuckin Key-Board-Down//

I Based All My Punches On His "About Me" Section On His myspace. So If You're Confused..Go Look lol (http://www.myspace.com/tredomino)

i'll Slay This Bitch-With-Ease, u Live Upto ur Name Cuz All u Spit-is-Cheese ..// (Mac n Cheese/Cheesey Songs)
Trying 2 Revive After This Battle is The Only Way You'll Hit-The-Beat ..//
And Like Most Of Tyson's-Opponents u Get Shaky When u See-The-Mic(Mike) ..//
Like it's Device-And-Componnents Shatter When u Proceed-To-Rhyme ..//
He Got an Attraction-To-His-Mom, Callin His Girl His Ol-Lady ..//
Mac, i Had-To-Do-This-Once, But i Could Shit On ur Flows-Daily ..//
Truth-is, He Wanted To Be Domino, So He Copied My Typing-Style ..//
i'll Smash Thru-This Useless Stupid Spoof-Bitch, ur Rhyming's-Vile ..//
Changed His Name From 'Flawless', He's Far From And He Saw-This ..//
Complexity Fixed The Battle So He Took The 'Shock-Award' as Promised ..//
i Look at u And Know-That-Not-All-Nerds-Are-Smart-My-Friend ..//
Forget The Mic, ur Flow's-Wack-Drop-The-Pen-And-Start-Again ..//
Learn Sumthin, Help-ur-Skill, it's Non-Existent, u Could Study Years, Learn-i'd-Still Drop-This-Bitch-Quick ..//
Never Chasin a Beat, Flawless-Missed-it, i'll Maul-This-Bitch-Quick And Claw-His-Stitches ..//
We Kno u Sent-Kawnvikt, To Avoid Gettin-Smoked-By-Me ..//
Now ur Death's-Promised, So u Can Just Get-ur-Coat-And-Leave ..//

Explanations - Off Beat Raps, Sounds Shaky, Calls His Gf His 'Ol Lady' (Another Word For Mom) Types Like Me Lol, Got The Shock Award

rhyme scheme - tied, dominos was more creative but not all of it went together smoothly
multis - tied
flow - mac by a little
personals - mac
punchlines - domino by a little

overall it was:

Yo' It's Evident That This Punk-Is-Posin, Yeah You Take Shots But It's Cum-in-Colons/
It's No Wonder You Got Jump-With-Closed-Fists Claimin You can Fight Well That Fuckin-Shows-It//
Now Ya Talkin Bout You Started Writin-At-Eight? Then Why You STILL Wack Dawg, You Needa Lock Ya Mic-In-a-Safe/
Cuz Truth Be Told You're Still Writin-The-Same Wack Shit You Was Prolly Writin-At-Eight//
An Dawg, You Can't Get Pussy At 16 Let Alone-At-Twelve/
The Only Way You "Might Possibly" Get Dome Is Sittin At Home Tryna Blow-Ya-Self//

vs.

i'll Slay This Bitch-With-Ease, u Live Upto ur Name Cuz All u Spit-is-Cheese ..//
Trying 2 Revive After This Battle is The Only Way You'll Hit-The-Beat ..//
And Like Most Of Tyson's-Opponents u Get Shaky When u See-The-Mic//
Like it's Device-And-Componnents Shatter When u Proceed-To-Rhyme ..//
Changed His Name From 'Flawless', He's Far From it And He Saw-This ..//
Complexity Fixed The Battle So He Took The 'Shock-Award' as Promised ..//

overall - mac, closest battle of the tourney imo, if domino came a lil iller with personals he would've took it, both had about the same amount of filler but macs was a tad better

Multis - Both
Punches - Domino Took Over Mac
Personals - Both
Flow - Domino (2 Me Mac Repeated Some His Lines)
Name Play -Domino
Structure - Domino

Domino Took This Battle To Me He Came Harder Than Mac But Mac Wasnt Bad
Favorite Lines : Trying 2 Revive After This Battle is The Only Way You'll Hit-The-Beat ..//
And Like Most Of Tyson's-Opponents u Get Shaky When u See-The-Mic(Mike) ..//
Like it's Device-And-Componnents Shatter When u Proceed-To-Rhyme ..//
He Got an Attraction-To-His-Mom, Callin His Girl His Ol-Lady ..//
Mac, i Had-To-Do-This-Once, But i Could Shit On ur Flows-Daily ..//

Punches - Domino Egded it ..
Scheme - Mac .. His Was More Creative ..
Multies - Tie ..
Wordplay - Dom ..
Entertainment - Dom
Personals - Tie ..

i Thought Dom` Egded Tha Battle .. it Was a Weak Battle IMO .. They Both Coulda Did Better in alot of areas .. Such as Punches & Wordplay ..

But Domino Won IMO ..

2-1 Still uppin

I'm Going TO Have TO Go With Mac on THis ONe And Agree With Drunken Jesus. If Domino Came WIth Some More Personals He Probably Would Have Taken It, It Was Close But i'm Going to have to go with Mac. All Cats Were Pretty Much Tied.

rhyme scheme - Tied
multis - Tied
flow - Tied
personals - Mac, He Just Hit Dom More With The Personals Wich Gave HIm The Win.
punchlines - Tied

Vote Mac.

mac took it, close though, domino if you would have made the personals a little better.

Vote: Mac

3-2 mac Uppin

Haha Finally Some Fuckin Votes. 3-2 Uppin

JmxTwiztid wrote:mac took it, close though, domino if you would have made the personals a little better.

Vote: Mac

do you mind explaining why you voted so...just in case someone feels your vote is bullshit.

3-2 Still Uppin Folks Lets End This Already....

Ey Admin We Might as Well Close This Now Cuz Mac's 2 Ahead And it Would Probably Take a Week For Anyone Else 2 Vote. And if i Was 2 Win at All Then it Would Probably Take Like 2 Weeks Lol.

Alright since its alright with you domino , Mac officially wins , congratulations and good luck in next round
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