R2 Tramatik vs Subsist (Tramatik)

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R2 Tramatik vs Subsist (Tramatik)

Post by drunken jesus » Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:17 pm

No biting, flipping, crew votes, or dickriding
6-8 bars in length
Due in Three Days
No Extensions Period!
3-0 KO - or - First to 5
All Free-Posts Will Be Removed! Do NOT check in only post before you drop your verse if you're not showing, all posts before both verses are dropped will be removed
4 Partcipants in R2,
Subsist vs Tramatik
& Mac vs. Domino
The winner of each battle goes into the finals
You must use at least one personal
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:43 pm

Subsist u tryna act tough while ill juz stay calm but then
explode and erode ya life,with one touch from my palm n pen -1
and ye ur face im'a 'smack that' but not like Akon or Em
but LOOK OUT Subsist knows Osama amd might try ta bomb us again! -2
i hurd u comin wit heat homie,so ill juz crush u with boulders
tryna get 'dirt' on me but like Jay-Z. im'a just brush u off my shoulders -3
but man hurry quick,come and rush in ya souljaz
wont do good cuz like Mummys ill turn u into dust thought i told ya? -4
u aint Aladdin son and u aint flyin on no rugs n mats
and i aint even tryna embarass u,ur religion already does that! -5
and if that aint enough..DAWG U LOST 2 PRECISE
I MEAN WAS HE A DENTIST?CUZ U GOT 'FLOSSED' PRETTY NICE -6
ONCE YA GIRL SEE'S THIS,SHE'LL BE ANOTHA THING U 'LOST' IN THIS FIGHT
U AINT USED'TA THE COLD SO ILL PUT EXTRA 'FROST' ON THE BITE -7
NOW ITS LIKE I GOT U ON YA KNESS SINCE U CROSSED MY SITE
THIS'LL GO IN THE 'BIN' AS MY WIN CUZ LIKE TRASH ULL GET 'TOSSED' WITHOUT MIGHT! -8

'bin' = the already finished battles
bar 3 - he tried gettin info or 'dirt' on me from sum1 on msn
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Post by Subsist » Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:54 pm

7 bars and my head is dry

i present my sickness leavin a room full of perplexed men
fag's drawin pictures of moons but cant get the text in //couldnt add TEXT to a graphic.
you need tourny rap trophies to show off on your street
kid's tryna outboast but he's stayin down like all feet
this is my next winning streak ,but for you it's the eulogy
battlin me you're weak ,yellin "subsist came make a fool o me"
go take a sabbatical,i dun wanna battle a thug called 'vince' //'his name'
a thug so tramatik his belt was never buckled since
his last battle with domino and his ass was ripped
listenin to "neva had a friend like you" while starin at his dick //"2pac song"
risk battlin subsist and get banished? SHIT , lets see whether this rich fag can handle it
my eyes are red cause i got angermanagement, and i excercise mesmerising lyrical magic and
vandalize your limbs im a fuckin savage, roll your heart and brain into a ham sandwich
your mom wants her pussy sucked n ravaged?,likes animal sex but trust me she cant handle this!

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Post by drunken jesus » Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:17 am

vote - tramatik, he took all categories, subsist had a few good lines but tramatiks verse was more creative and better written overall
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:56 am

thanx..uppin 1-0

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Post by Haz » Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:59 am

My Vote Tramatik He Had Strong Punches Multis
Personals Favorite Lines :U AINT USED'TA THE COLD SO ILL PUT EXTRA 'FROST' ON THE BITE -7
NOW ITS LIKE I GOT U ON YA KNESS SINCE U CROSSED MY SITE
THIS'LL GO IN THE 'BIN' AS MY WIN CUZ LIKE TRASH ULL GET 'TOSSED' WITHOUT MIGHT!

Subsist Favorite Lines :a thug so tramatik his belt was never buckled since
his last battle with domino and his ass was ripped
listenin to "neva had a friend like you" while starin at his dick
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Post by -TraMaTiK- » Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:24 am

word thanx...2-0

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Post by complexity » Fri Jan 05, 2007 5:44 am

"and i aint even tryna embarass u,ur religion already does that! -5 "

Tramatic ripped this shit. That wasn't a boring verse homie. Sorry Subsist but tramatic is moving on his personals and punchlines were a lot better.

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