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so looks like fiction yeah that right
i fight for my shit no crap rhymes jus life
i take ya shit in strife
me not makin it is like gettin drowned whilst in the dessert right?
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

If I Dun Make It Az A Rapper,I'll Be An Emcee..
Rhyme Words Stronger,Coz Trying Again Tempts Me..
Coz With The Struggles In The Game,Im Hopin Lord Dun ,Fail Me..
Coz Instead Of Gettin Shot,I Rather To Be Like Christ. Nail Me..

Just Felt like contributing coz its real interestin topik

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nice nice we aint seen much of u so where ya been
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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if i dont make it it'll be a dream
i'll wake up to milions inpossible though it sems
but dont lie to yourself cry n rebel
if u cant make it give up keep tryin flyin the cell
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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"if i dont make it" dam i musta aint read it rite
da shit must be fa da shitty rappers dats on da site

cuz i can be wateva i want if i keep my mind on it dats da truth,
yea datruth neva fail you can tell by seein da cash stacked past da roof
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sound like ya havin ago at us no no
lol
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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lol no da shit gotta rhyme rite lol
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..if i Don't Make it i`ll Probably Be Hustlin Tapes, On Tha Corner Wit Jose, Hustlin Grapes ..
Be On Some Gorilla Pimp Shit, Or Juss a Strugglin Ape, Or Probably a Runner for a Drug Dealer Smugglin Bait ..
Maybe That Kid That Would Run in ya Crib, Catch Me Cuttin ya Mate, Or That Lil Nigga Wit No Home always Frontin To Stay ..
Or That Heartless Playa That Moms Warned They Daughters about, Wantin to Play, I Could Be Wateva, it`s Nothin to May ..Lol ..

Listenin to That Lupe Fiasco - Coulda Been
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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if i dont make it i'll go to crack make my money hustlin
sell crack cocaine heroin E PCP wot eva be bustlin

but its unlikely nobody gone hear of me
battle a G smack em B ya queer i see
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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