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Post by complexity »

hmm, maybe for a cypher, but thats a pretty short freestyle, it was um ok?
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hmmm your great.
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Post by Viral »

itd b nice wen making new cypher topics...dey have names such as...1 bar...2 bar 3 bar...weapon cypher..things like that...not..... "well....." and then have a basic bar...not downin...jst sayin...if u wanna post cyphers..either do it in exsisting ones or make one that has a subject so its not jst...ummmmmm yeah!.....and if u wanna drop verses...thats wat writtens would b for...other than that...it wasnt bad...but could b worked on tremendously (kinda like the spellin for dat word)
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spit like a brain surgeon as i "split decisions"/
my recitals cut vitals and make kids suicidal leading to wrist slittin/

i analyze a rappers mind and pick it apart like hannibal lecter/
to cross and connect secters, lyrical wizard put down the pen and pick up a scepter/

forget aesthetics comming from verbal athletics/
at-best-its pathetic when kids try rapping back flips, some people cant spit accept-it/
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cant nobody see me once this nigga reach his prime/ i been sittin, patient, waitin for a niggas time/ to receive a niggas shine, but not like you cause you be lien'/ and yo pimpin's like Ray Ca$h, only in ur mind/if you searchin 4 da greatest, it is i that you shall find/ when i spit dat, shit dat, blows you niggas minds/ once the concepts i conceive and ur psyche intertwine/ fire synapses down ur spine & have you reachin for rewind/ my rap sheet might not be long, but my credits lookin fine/ ur G-pass has no balance, yo card will get declined/u gotta lotta room 4 play but if you ever cross dat line/whateva thought you was thinkin will be tha last to cross yo mind/guaranteed its safe to say you'll neva cross that line again/ my smile turn into a grin as you meet my lil friend/ then i unleash, that hidden beast that i kept sealed within/ & we'll kill em, resuscitate him and kill his ass again/and im a keep it goin till a nigga feels at ease/ until i finally come to terms that we have reached capiche'/until u finally believe and that belief becomes complete/ too bad you didnt realize it b4 u met defeat, now you're deceased/ no need for further mention in lyrics/ im sippin on some fine wines and brilliantly distilled spirits/thinkin aloud to myself hoping ya bitch overhear it/ so i can giver her my blessings while uplifting her spirits/ and thats just how my pimpin is; my shit is sick/ you might find your self askin me questions bout ur bitch/ i'll be like "naw i havent seen her" but she's really at my crib/waitin for me to return so that we can get it in/ see she tryna be my lover, im a keep her as a friend/ cuz i done been down dat road b4 & i aint tryna go again/ head like a toothless zombie how she bobbin on my shit/ you woulda thought shorty was a blood the way she slobbin on this dick/and she cant deny the urges though she pregnant wit yo kid/ i'm glad i never told her about that time the condom did had ripped/ im too calm about my shit/ but thats just how a nigga rolls/ smooth, calm, collected, until a nigga lose control/ any bitch wit a pussy then im commin for ya hole/ any bitch nigga who trippin then im commin for ya soul//
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Im in the lab blowin shit up like an arab.
Spit on any track where i can stand out like a folder tab.
Holdin that, place above the rest boy i be towerin.
Lettin rymes drizzle over beats yeah im showerin/ 
Somethin bout the steelo grabs attention from people.
Must be cus i be doper than columbian kilos.
Yo, you listo? I hope you is cus this the time to tell em.
That everythin is murdered soon as i open the mel-on

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Who's this that you're hearing again?
dedicated to the people, lives, and events
God are you there? cuz mom isn't here
daddy cries in silence, his tears fall to the ground
all my sound, my work, all my music fuses
humans confusing people, livin in a world that's not so see througth
that said, the booth is lethal
I become a weapon, everytime I step in, step out
Lyrics in effect now, bullets in .wav form and everybody's set now
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This is comin from me- I
I am summonin' these lines
and I'm runnin' these beats nice
and my reasonin' remains right
so I easily defeat pride
and add seasoning to each line
so that my seeds 'll bring pyre
I'm freezing these undesired
pieces of me and releasing em higher
But it ain't easy to seek, my minds retired
keeping these species of my rhyme tired
but I'm not needing to keep myself dire
so I'm defeating the weak pieces of me
and reaching to peaks and speakin' like fire
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After all the hating-shit...Who'd have thought I would be-making-it
Me & hip hop..The patient & the nurse relationship
Is more like-an-affair..I stay faithful in this crooked-ass-job
You the type-to-just-wail, saying your home's Brooklyn-or-Bronx
When it's North-Dakota...Fake Carlton Fisk, pretends to export-the-soda
Mixed with the poison..A million dollars to drop you, Snitch-gets-no-choice-when
Placed in abandoned cribs-with-shooters, Rather than you live-through-rumors
Taking it from backside, I flatline you worse than Chris-and-Snoop-does
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Post by UFO »

most of ya r internet creations
like viral videos
im the sickest u ever met
like viruses in sick hoes
im way past ur intellect
n violatin ur bitch ass flows
while my skills a perfect ten
n thats y u hate me so
ur an unruly diva n ima tame u chicks
fuk u lames im a drought n ill end ur reign (rain) quick
wit that insane spit that make niggas vacate quick
N hate on this
cuz they know my flows ungodly like an A-THE -IST
ill have your family killed like AMITYVILLE
n end your life quick like the morning after pill
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I'm not green like bruce banner...Far as these true honest spits
They make you lose consciousness
Like mothers fall on their hips...cause their son used scholarships
Something to be proud of...I see your crews & they're nothing but cowards
Misconstruing beliefs...I won't confront the real proper
I'm not shooting a fiend...I'll be clutching a pill popper
Worse than Nicky Santoro...Disrespecting him in his own city or borough
Niggas acting like they own titties with girdles
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Post by BIGVIRGE »

I'm wild like the child
who cuts up them paedophiles
A lyrical assassin
whose skills are built for rattling
these snakes who keep on snaggling
the minds of folks now battling
for what .... a job ....
a house to rob ....
a piece of corn
not off ... the cobb

The chit's all wrong
Yeah .... fuck the cops
and those up top
who keep them strong
then talk about
how crimes gone down
except the crimes
they hide behind
that keep the people
starved and blind

I'm a different kind
of lyrical guy ....
My mind is primed
to utilize .... the gift of sight
beyond my eyes ...

that third eye sight
that ... "FEELS" ... what's right
and separates
the fakes and snakes
and keeps them in their proper place

Beneath my feet ....
just like emcees
who feel the need
to drop their frees
to prove that they've got
more than me ... ???

They come ... they go
with ignorant flows
X crapper clones
from Hip Hop zones
where Kirk and his crew
just would not go ....

Their styles are ones
that are below ...
the levels of ....
true lyrical prose ...

Oh ... I meant pros ...
you didn't know
that when I flow
I'm one of those ...

"Called" .... not chose
to break your hopes
of being ... "The One" ... !!!
You ain't Neo son ... !!!

The Matrix has you
trapped like chicks
whose moves just prove
what kind of tricks
will catch a bitch ....

hardcore lyrics
that make you think ....
beyond the home
of ... "thunderdomes"
where devils roam
and attack like clones ....

This ain't star wars
but feel my cause ....
to ... uplift flows
and battle pros
to do what's right
and carry the fight

to the guys who try
to control our lives

Hip Hop survives
to elevate minds

It's time to rise
and .... mobilize
and utilize rhymes
to uplift young minds ....

That's a quick freestyle
of thoughtful rhymes
that deserve their place ....

In the annals of time ..... !!!

Peace, Blessings & Guidance y'all

Here's my site for you serious minds !!!

http://www.bigvirge.com
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Post by frostedblake »

WOAH!!when it comes to flow,yall faggits is the worse
that dope,i disperse,and got hoes cuz my dick longer than his^^^ verse
when im down n around,his mom's tits hurt,she treats me like a RAppuH
with the lines,i'll attack-ya,i drop flows everyday like Niagra
falls,ima boss,in the malls,i ball,i put your hoe on all fours like a dog
she aint seen this much smoke since she watched "The Fog"
we thuggin'bitch,the games somewhat changed,but im lovin' it,
no joke,ive made more niggas go broke than the government
fuck Dem pricks,aint a nerd but far as they concern,i nevA touched Dem bricks
and if its out of court no child support, i did fuck their chicks
them hookers aint handing out burgers but they'll suck your dick!!
see my style is wild i never pretend it,flows deeper den the nile,im demented
weedpiles,im gettin,as far as freestyles,im winnin and im out like Lennon...
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S the Bandit! Flexes Grand With Texts of Granite/ get ya Neck Detached Quick from the frame it hung,cos flames are brung in the Flesh or Gadgets/ Render Damage to rappers regardless of Vet'ren Status/with Extra Malice, have em Ingesting Tablets made of Lead and Acid/ ya'll just Joker Fresh, Holding Techs Aimin at the Ace/he just Scopes the Set for Open Chests and Change Thoracic Plates/you the Lamest Basket Case, tryna Face this Rappin Sage/ Maintainin Master State, while you Claim Ya Average Base/ just a quick free

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Post by Alvin »

If raps a mexican, I'm taco bell-
no war stories, never been to jail-
hell, I don't own a gun there too heavy-
best compliment I got was on call of duty-
an 8 yr old told me I was deadly-
every Friday the 13 I'm on top of my fridge hiding from freddy-
a machete in hand just in case jason pays me a visit-
lyricisms about elavation, shit I'm almost considered a midget-

Erno

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-- Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:00 pm --

I'm defying death with each tooth brush stroke-
Trying to keep my ish talking down fo' them good ole folks-
When I freestyle I go for broke-
Which isn't hard with empty pockets-
Thank goodness that my imaginations strapped to a rocket-
But my fuse seems broke so it may be time to stop it-
Judging by the activity on this forum, its gonna be more like time to pause it-

-Erno
(Hopefully the last line won't make sence.)
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