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make sure to use punchlines

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Yo, Kid You Don't Even Hang Near Me
Nobody Believes Precise Hype Like The Big Bang Theory!

When Precise Battles Me And Doesn't Actually Write
He's At A Slight Disadvantage, Like Climbing An Avalanche

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avalanche? the snow falls like toms-career/
he raps audio and ill lend an awkword-ear...//

the big-bang, is scientifically proved like my name is//
and your shit-stains? yea almost as brown as youre avatars mayne-is//
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage

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yo whats up with that? it seems ur flows tense
but the rap was like your life makes no sense

call yourself precise? yet you can't read or write
ill put a hole in your fucking surface like a metorite

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since the topic seems to be space ill cling-to-patterns//
lets face it, in a month ill be holdin more fuckin rings-then-saturn//

hmm, ive often wondered toms ethnicity, and if ians his name or just another-he-took//
but lets face it, his whole "image" is black AND white, like a brand new colouring-book//
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
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Your Nothing Man Just Spitting Some Text At Me
Like Stage 4 Lung Cancer, Its Evident You Can't Beat Complexity

I'm Setting A Precedent, U Know This Kid Fears The Flow
Your Using Punchlines That Are Hot! "four years ago"

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I should have cancer cause im smokin complex//
your rhymes are weak,couldn't feel when they flex//

Are you crazy, no ones fearin-your-flow//
man your rhymes are weak,the view is clear-at-your-show//
from 3 at pm to 4 in tha mornin this bitch will be workin//
pay her 50 dollars and shell be contortin' and explorin your jeans//
doin all sorts of nasty things, wipin the cum off her chin//
for 5 more dollars shell do it all again//

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creativity, skills, just being ill, i give the reader all this
nobody gives a fuck about sky not even meteorologist

your style is shit, i got the vialest spit,you should just forfeit
oh yah...you'd choke on smoke like taking a toke off a bong while your sick

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complexity you are in FACT bitch, you can get smacked-quick//
ive noticed youre "gums" keep flappin like youre spitting through "wacks-lips"// (wax lips..gum)

plex, why is it that in cyphers your rhymes suck? look just dont take part-in-em //
youre skill stops like ali's did after he got parkinson//(spelling? lol the disease)
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precise must be wearin wax lips thats why he cant spit//
ill diss em both,plex and precise should quit//

No one cares about sky..what are you high?//
you both couldn't out rap richard simmons so why try//
from 3 at pm to 4 in tha mornin this bitch will be workin//
pay her 50 dollars and shell be contortin' and explorin your jeans//
doin all sorts of nasty things, wipin the cum off her chin//
for 5 more dollars shell do it all again//

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U Suck AT Rapping, Skywalker beating me it wont happen
You'd Have A Better Chance Seeing Kevin Federline Go Platinum

Slashing This Bitch In Half, Everyone I Know Hates Him
You'll Never Win A Battle, To Bad I Couldn't Donate Wins

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word, you write awkword and seem-to-lie//
sky---WalK---er <--- you should leave, read between-tha-lines//

please-resign or youll be-defined as a weaker-mind//
all your shit is pointless like returnin to the scene-of-crime//

yea wack, i got writers block like mad lol
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For You! Help is Dim, treat you like acid and Melt yuh Skin,
My Lines are fat yuh rhymes Gettin Thin like your overdosin on Dexatrim,
Ill Incave ya Skull, you aint got heat if you Aimed then Pulled,
You aint Made of Nul, you couldnt be the "shit" if you Payed the "Bull"
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page

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Post by complexity »

LISTEN DUMMY, THERE IS NOTHING REAL ABOUT GHOST
HIDE FROM ME, I'll BURN DOWN THE FUCKING OUT-POST

THERE IS NOTHING AUTHENTIC ABOUT A GHOST
EVEN UNITED POSTAL SERVICE WOULD DOUBT YA POST

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SHUT THE FUCK UP, U STAY FAKIN, I'M ABOUT TA POST
THIS BITCH IS CLAY AIKEN HE NEEDS TO COME OUT TA FOLKS

ON A SERIOUS NOTE, YOUR NOT NEAR-ME, JUST FEAR-ME
I DONT SEE NOTHIN IN GHOST, LIKE I'M NOT SEEING CLEARLY

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