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This is drama hour,a moment where vagabonds are bound to evade..
then frown up their face cause of a drastic loss in glower and hate..
Pouting away..knowing they cant outfit the gods power embraced..
I lent them matching socks and trousers incase..
their clout had became more washed up than astronaut showering rates..
Tis Thee Martians time of year humans never knew or realized was near..
By taking focus off the crop circles like unsettled PS users resizing spheres!
Take a hike if you think I Mauna Loa point..
and "You" clowns are sober? Oi!..
i havent loathed a more annoying noise than older songs from soldier boy..!
go on boast with joy! cause your best streaks less to me..
while i retch frees recklessly with Jet Li weaponry..
i'll sweat and bleed estacy till text geeks mention me..
As the best thing ever seen Along the lines of Cold Blooded since Yeti Pedigrees!
So like Moses,play your part and sea why the truth'll weigh down on ya heart soon
if you can't handle the negative feedback,i advise to stay out of the dark room!
Just dont display a gay pattern unclever for earthlings souls bottled..
cause your shades of grey matter would never exhibit a perfect role mottle..
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http://www.illhill.com/forum/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=16361

Prove it's you and we'll let you keep posting.
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gauge is my name on illhill..but my main alias is Joel VeNoM..if you want me to prove it i can message you on aim right now..smh
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Alright man. Thanks for letting me know.
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lol good shit man, u need to check in our battle though..

the piece though imma give a 7/10

lack of complexity or multis..thats` all the flaws though, nice concept and tone...nothing outstanding but good enuff
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