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Greed

Post by NeverOddOrEven » Fri May 25, 2012 9:52 am

[center]Greed

Before you reach the sky, you gotta create a tower
And a balcony to look down at the fakes and cowards
It seems like each day that they waste their hours
Each lame excuse and complaint gets louder
Why do we let our leaders decide which fate is ours?
Just cuz you felt some rain, you didn't wanna wait for flowers?
But once you get a taste of power, the whole plate's devoured
I don't know why you haters thought these grapes were sour
Don't you see how they control you with media shit?
Check Weezy's new hit! A new season of Cribs!
Selena is pissed, guess who Justin Bieber just kissed?!
Go ahead, watch it! Rest your feet for a bit
Log into Facebook! C'mon, you need to be with your friends!
Evil exists in the unattainable elitist abyss
No one seems to give a shit if people are sick
Does compassion for other human beings even exist?
Some people get depressed, cut, and bleed from the wrist
Applications distractin you from the greedy and rich
Don't believe me, then shit, Wikipedia it
Or for some really fun facts, try reading this link:
http://www.optimist123.com/optimist/200 ... e_cha.html

Real talk. I'm out.[/center]

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Re: Greed

Post by AntiMaTTer » Sat May 26, 2012 2:11 am

Before you reach the sky, you gotta create a tower
And a balcony to look down at the fakes and cowards
love how the opening lines started out and the rhyme and multis are nice, good opener.

It seems like each day that they waste their hours
Each lame excuse and complaint gets louder
Why do we let our leaders decide which fate is ours?
Just cuz you felt some rain, you didn't wanna wait for flowers?
keeping a good momentum and still a nice rhyme scheme im liking the content so far too with use of imagery and metaphors

But once you get a taste of power, the whole plate's devoured
I don't know why you haters thought these grapes were sour
Don't you see how they control you with media shit?
Check Weezy's new hit! A new season of Cribs!
Selena is pissed, guess who Justin Bieber just kissed?!
Go ahead, watch it! Rest your feet for a bit
Log into Facebook! C'mon, you need to be with your friends!
Evil exists in the unattainable elitist abyss
No one seems to give a shit if people are sick
Does compassion for other human beings even exist?
Some people get depressed, cut, and bleed from the wrist
Applications distractin you from the greedy and rich
Don't believe me, then shit, Wikipedia it

the rest of the verse was solid thru out and i liked reading this piece. a good topic to spit about which i love writing about conscious movements myself so you should take the time to read some of my Freemason/Illuminati expose' writtens, you might enjoy em. hit me up for the link and ill find it.
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Re: Greed

Post by MonuMental » Sat May 26, 2012 5:44 am

I gotta say, this joint was dope. I love your content, your use of multies was definitely on point, and your schemes were nicely laid out. Nothing is going over anyone's head. Nice piece, here, hombre. Keep droppin em.
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