"The Space Aviator"

[PMP_Or_Better]

[center]Practice Makes Perfect Or Better...[/center][center]If I ever the knew the basic fundaments of aeronautics
I would dare a pilot to embark on all my cherished knowledge
On a mechanism I invented to prepare the body
For a blast off into space like a military rocket
To share the goblet of adventure in the universe
Would be a lot of fun but it be could be difficult to immerse
It's durable efficient the engine can move through Earth
So you won't die cause I assembled the suit to work
Topnotch armor that's equipped for any guy
Or any women who is willing to stiffen my enterprise
If you got it I'll support you if you wanna fly
Although the quality of it differs among the price
Don't wonder why I underline this as extraordinary
Extra-ordinary competition isn't all that scary
The space aviator's an amazing outlet
With enough natural energy in it...it could break a mountain
A crazy output of renewable sources are truly important
For this computer endorsed and enhanced beautiful fortune
That I create, allowing any human on Earth to fly in space
So if you ever wanna soar through a cosmic place
Do yourself a big favor and buy my wings
The space aviator!!![/center]
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[Momeijah]

Cool. I dunno if this was a metaphor or what but either way it's different. Sounds like something that would be part of a concept album if you were to record it. Once again your vocab and rhymes shined through the most but the imagery was also dope. It's a real creative verse I enjoyed the first one I read from you and wasn't let down by this one either which is good lol.

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