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Blake Downs
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quick freestyle

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Wit no laser i beam fast,on sum mozart shit im higher than a b flat
somethin like taco-bell,cause i be servin supreme raps
harming like the armys,im killin teams fast,
runnin it like 3 laps,im so dope,she just relapsed,
i drop n rock plenty reps,many threats,and skinny breasts,
charlie sheen,am i winning? yes!
its not even a questttion im 1stplace in the race,
so like a fat hungry nigga im demolishin seconds great
real mind n ill rhymes embedded wait..
my spits n kicks are doper than scarfaces weddin cake
mortal kombat steeze my hell it beckons n i got hella weapons to the point where
i be wreckin collectives in milli seconds
much respect within lesson cause i got more kicks than tekken,
so if a girl wanna kick like it soccer then ima bend it like beckham
my lil lightwork kid is similar to snoop dogg gone wrong,im the beast,im the don,
i blazed on that hashish now my eyes chinked like im from hong kong
HIYYAHH!! im blake the messiah,
im like elevators,i just wont stop gettin higha
but im the supplier,and your the buyer
im the hip hop mcgyver my bars are hotter than satans fire
i break em later and wreck em early,worthy,currently no worry,
cause even in a flurry of hurry im still flyer than a fuckin birdie
larry bird,im certainly worthy,fresh,earthly,
and yes wordy,sky high like a g-5 im onto the next journey
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Re: quick freestyle

Post by PMP_Or_Better »

I like. Honestly, I just wish it was more presentable, but that's just me. Good multi's and good punchlines. I could feel the charisma while reading it lol. You should spit it over a beat or something.
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FatalX
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Re: quick freestyle

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this is sick---definately the style I like to read and listen to....thoughts flowed well-rhyme scheme solid...I am envious...keep doing you
I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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NeverOddOrEven
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Re: quick freestyle

Post by NeverOddOrEven »

Definitely not a "stream of consciousness" freestyle, but I really liked this a lot. Some of the wordplay/punchlines were simple, but they were so consistent that it was still clever. You should format it better and not abbreviate your words as much, it makes it more enjoyable. And yeah, the flow was almost perfect and the multis, when used, were on point.

8/10 keep it up!
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