Imagine never relaxing, you'd mentally crumble
I ascended with a splended tremendous rebuttal
I've been accused that I ended a couple
only reason you hate me is I pretended to love you
maybe I did, there's too many memories to juggle
I ain't wasting my time on another identity struggle
I've went through the waves, battled the tides
got really blazed, lived off natural highs
my heart broken and empty, its an ugly horrible sight
never knew a mind could be a torture device
the horrors of life, got you thinking in retrospect
the only way you can forget is drinking yourself to death
all I ask for is respect, but its hard to earn it
I got millions of miles to go, I'm that far from perfect
girls rock your world one day, then its an avalanch
if I kept her a bit more happy, would I have a chance?
its bad, I have this habit of being nice as hell
then if we fight its like, I always need to right myself
alone in solitude again, its like I always lose
my bodies bruised and all I got is booze
so, I'll take another shot in, drink another beer
all of you are stupid, talking to me, thinking that I'm here
Why I Drink #1
Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend
- complexity
- Elevated
- Posts: 9689
- Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:09 am
- Wins: 48
- Losses: 15
- Location: Maine
- Contact:
- cyanidesyn
- Lyrically Inclined
- Posts: 124
- Joined: Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:05 am
- Wins: 1
- Losses: 1
Re: Why I Drink #1
damn bro this shit deep n i fucks wit this heavy tha meesage solid ur style is on point i couldnt say anything bad about it good shit
-
- Supreme Lyricist
- Posts: 6800
- Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
- Wins: 67
- Losses: 70
- Location: The Port
Re: Why I Drink #1
Imagine never relaxing, you'd mentally crumble
I ascended with a splended tremendous rebuttal
I've been accused that I ended a couple
only reason you hate me is I pretended to love you
maybe I did, there's too many memories to juggle
I ain't wasting my time on another identity struggle
I've went through the waves, battled the tides
got really blazed, lived off natural highs
Loved this..
never knew a mind could be a torture device
so true, feeling the wrath right now lol
the horrors of life, got you thinking in retrospect
the only way you can forget is drinking yourself to death
I Agree
all I ask for is respect, but its hard to earn it
I got millions of miles to go, I'm that far from perfect
God damn plex.. that second line
girls rock your world one day, then its an avalanch
if I kept her a bit more happy, would I have a chance?
Exactly lol
its bad, I have this habit of being nice as hell
then if we fight its like, I always need to right myself
alone in solitude again, its like I always lose
my bodies bruised and all I got is booze
so, I'll take another shot in, drink another beer
all of you are stupid, talking to me, thinking that I'm here
Good closer bro...
Overall this was harsh reality man,
so realistic... Really liked the hard hitting lines
and rhyme scheme.. glad to see this, Keep it up
I ascended with a splended tremendous rebuttal
I've been accused that I ended a couple
only reason you hate me is I pretended to love you
maybe I did, there's too many memories to juggle
I ain't wasting my time on another identity struggle
I've went through the waves, battled the tides
got really blazed, lived off natural highs
Loved this..
never knew a mind could be a torture device
so true, feeling the wrath right now lol
the horrors of life, got you thinking in retrospect
the only way you can forget is drinking yourself to death
I Agree
all I ask for is respect, but its hard to earn it
I got millions of miles to go, I'm that far from perfect
God damn plex.. that second line
girls rock your world one day, then its an avalanch
if I kept her a bit more happy, would I have a chance?
Exactly lol
its bad, I have this habit of being nice as hell
then if we fight its like, I always need to right myself
alone in solitude again, its like I always lose
my bodies bruised and all I got is booze
so, I'll take another shot in, drink another beer
all of you are stupid, talking to me, thinking that I'm here
Good closer bro...
Overall this was harsh reality man,
so realistic... Really liked the hard hitting lines
and rhyme scheme.. glad to see this, Keep it up
- AntiMaTTer
- Army Of Three
- Posts: 716
- Joined: Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:52 am
- Wins: 16
- Losses: 1
Re: Why I Drink #1
my fav was the intro lines. the rhyme scheme here was prettyImagine never relaxing, you'd mentally crumble
I ascended with a splended tremendous rebuttal
I've been accused that I ended a couple
only reason you hate me is I pretended to love you
maybe I did, there's too many memories to juggle
I ain't wasting my time on another identity struggle
sick and it just flowed smoothly and was pretty intricate.
the first 2 lines def set it off too. the rest of the verse
was good but not as tight as the quoted portion i think. nice drop tho i can hear this on a beat too.
IL record:
16-1
- complexity
- Elevated
- Posts: 9689
- Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:09 am
- Wins: 48
- Losses: 15
- Location: Maine
- Contact:
Re: Why I Drink #1
As usual, people quote the part I wrote before, in comparison to the continuation.
I appreciate the feed.
definitely wasn't horrible for my first piece in 8 months.
I appreciate the feed.
definitely wasn't horrible for my first piece in 8 months.
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests