City-Don't Sleep Remix (Speed rap)

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City-Don't Sleep Remix (Speed rap)

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I rapped City's Don't Sleep rap but rapped it faster.

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Re: City-Don't Sleep Remix (Speed rap)

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This isn't bad at all... I like the fast flow
I would work on your Presence, put more feeling into what your saying
say your words more clear... get a better mic N turn the beat up more
mix your vocals better.

other then that, good stuff I always like to see someone starting up
we all start somewhere, keep practicing and polish your flow.
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Re: City-Don't Sleep Remix (Speed rap)

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Thanks for the advice I've found it's harder to pronounce words clearly when you're rappin' fast but will try to do that more.
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