just for YOU-feedback appreciated

[FatalX]

I wanna watch the world burn-->then play in its ashes//
I want to fuck with your head while I'm playing with matches//
I want to make you think shit-->that you hate to imagine//
then turn around and let you know that I've been saying this backwards//
It begins.......the clock--has just started ticking//
... watch me stare into your eyes as I applaud my next victim//
caution wears into your mind this is not science fiction//
this is on the same tip-that made God think of wisdom//
raw intuition---->mixed with premeditation//
the sickest of intentions "lost in translation"//
I have brought the same craving,most often found in sadist//
and I thought I taught you thought,is where I operate baby//
you should conjugate bravely,where you lurk is in danger//
Im that bump in the night-the one you hate to call stranger//
you should make the call later,is this real or a joke?//
its like your stuck in a mirror-that Im filling with smoke//

-- Wed May 02, 2012 4:01 pm --



-- Wed May 02, 2012 4:01 pm --

...Why Write?...

-- Wed May 02, 2012 4:02 pm --

Craziest Ride

[BIC]

This is fire. best part i thought - raw intuition---->mixed with premeditation//the sickest of intentions "lost in translation"//. All dope im new here but lovin the words. Keep doing what you do.