Heres your verse Mr.Green
Fag you knw I'm Hot with Words, When I drop get Served...//
If Scotts a Herb then quit ur bitchin and Drop a Verse!...//
Or end up Boxed in Church, Fag, phony, Lame fukk...//
Bitch Only battles homies whens his changes upp...//
U stay ducked, Ur puns are weak u don't want the Beef...//
Cuz my "base-Ball", so I'm on top of the green monster like Upper Seats...//
This fukk is Sweet u ain't touchin p,cuz for instance hes Gay...//
Hes neck gets chopped put ya head in a box like NFL refs lookin at Instant Replay...//
Fukk mean!, fags soul is Frail...//
So I'll crush Green and Smoke an L...//
Matter Fact Fukk Green!,this a Black Rap in my Black Fad, I got sum Black Mags...//
Ina black hat an a Black mask, shootin Black bullets to put u in a Black Bag!...//
Ur wack fag, all in all ur a bitch and Ur sawed off isn't Shit...//
How about a sawed off to the hip or using every murder tech from saw one thru six!...//
Every word I'm spittin hurts cuz I serve Precision...//
Hes like ur rhymes are gay and ur lines are played, which is every Verse U've written!...//
yea yea die slow...reply too... I wanna see wht u got kid....misses green...hahahaha
Green Blood
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Re: Green Blood
<< lol that shit was cool nice imagery.Ur wack fag, all in all ur a bitch and Ur sawed off isn't Shit...//
How about a sawed off to the hip or using every murder tech from saw one thru six!...//
solid multis thru out but also some filler multis and repeating words (i mean aside from black) in your multis
this was also well developed line i think had imagery, pun, punch etc this is wat you should be focusing on when battling are these kinda punchs or persnoalsThis fukk is Sweet u ain't touchin p,cuz for instance hes Gay...//
Hes neck gets chopped put ya head in a box like NFL refs lookin at Instant Replay...//
good verse thru out that BLACK MASK etc part wasnt bad i can hear that
over a beat tho rather than being for text.
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Well this verse and the verse for pest I wrote it as if it was sum audio and I kinda wanted whoever read this to kinda get that feeling so yea, but I feel u thanks for the feed anti...
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Re: Green Blood
Not bad im mobile so I will post it later 2nd bar was the best readingf it as audio that is
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Haha u would like that filler line but aight I'll wait for ur verse soonn
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