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PyDizZLE21
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Post by PyDizZLE21 »

This is for u sweet heart.......

ayoooooo......

Wait...stop the Mic a Bit, let me Recite sum Shit...//
I'm Burnin It my words permeant like I write with Bic...//
Bitches like to Dip, I mean pest an that other type of Snitch...//
U got no Lines to Spit, no time to give, so get boxed when Both nines get Gripped...//
If ur Hip Hop then u made it Gay, Ain't Spit shit cuz ur Afraid to Say...//
Toss "Pest-i-cide",ur chest'll fry since u buggin when I "Raid" and Spray...//
I'll make it Rain today!... in a chopper with a Gatlin Gun..//
U need Practice son, u defeat crews but u still Couldn't battle ONE!..//(antis call out)
I'll Handle Em, Get stabbed with a Rust knife thru ur Guts Right...//
Don't touch mics, cuz u couldn't handle "Ant" cuz U live a "Bugs life"...//
Music?, I still haven't seen u Yet, Watch that Beam Eject and ur Team get Swept..//
U don't got the means to Check, if u rearranged ur name u still wouldn't have the means to Step...//
U see a threat!...cuz when I recite the Mic gets Fried, spit fire till u Ignite an Die...//
Ur the type of guy, that won't fight but lie, and when beat u hold ya Cries Inside...//(haha)

This is key I better see u Pen me, fukk ur crew only green u knw is Green with Envy.....bitch...ya I caled u a bitch.....wait for it BITCH...from me to u pest BITCH......hahahaha
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yo bro this flame nuff said
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Good looking out thanks bruuuhhhh
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Post by AntiMaTTer »

why didnt you battle like this on your other battles on here lol.

good diss man i liked it. the opening few lines were coo
ive thought of the "pest a cide" line myself but never used it cuz i figure it was played but i like how you used the RAID and spray line adding to the word play to it. good shit my man


py man PM me we should talk some biz
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Wait...stop the Mic a Bit, let me Recite sum Shit...//
I'm Burnin It my words permeant like I write with Bic...//

I thought the bic part is a played concept.. smooth flow

Bitches like to Dip, I mean pest an that other type of Snitch...//
U got no Lines to Spit, no time to give, so get boxed when Both nines get Gripped...//

Nice aggressive flow

If ur Hip Hop then u made it Gay, Ain't Spit shit cuz ur Afraid to Say...//
Toss "Pest-i-cide",ur chest'll fry since u buggin when I "Raid" and Spray...//

Heard the concept, but you flipped it well.

I'll make it Rain today!... in a chopper with a Gatlin Gun..//
U need Practice son, u defeat crews but u still Couldn't battle ONE!..//(antis call out)

word

I'll Handle Em, Get stabbed with a Rust knife thru ur Guts Right...//
Don't touch mics, cuz u couldn't handle "Ant" cuz U live a "Bugs life"...//

I thought this was a weird line cause ant's starred in bugs life. smooth flow still.

Music?, I still haven't seen u Yet, Watch that Beam Eject and ur Team get Swept..//
U don't got the means to Check, if u rearranged ur name u still wouldn't have the means to Step...//

Nice multi's

U see a threat!...cuz when I recite the Mic gets Fried, spit fire till u Ignite an Die...//
Ur the type of guy, that won't fight but lie, and when beat u hold ya Cries Inside...//(haha)

LoL, I thought this was a good humorous closer..


I know you said this is a key.. so I can understand the more played concept theme of this verse. But you did Flip everything well.. while stringing everything nicely together with your multis... I'd like to see what your potential amounts to, this was a pretty nice verse, Keep It up.
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Dog this was ill as fukk son! mad props...
that line when you kicked it off about stopping the mic when you wernt even on it was dope as shit...
and i nevr get tired of the pest-aside lines either... after the 10th time its still classic...
i really underestimated you foo...
your the dopest on her fuh sho....
i bow to you...
your the man.

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at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
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i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: To Pest

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Ur obviously being sarcastic ass haha
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