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Komain
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Quick keystyle

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I never claim to be the hardest but i think smartest//
if i get fucked up im coming back regardless//
im heartless, im moving with the deepest & darkest//
Friends stab your back, enemies use targets//

i dont start shit, trouble always finds me//
coming out of nowhere, sneaking up behind me//
i aint looking for a label to sign me//
im a changed man, so i say "FUCK YOU" politely//

no-one can ever say i never put the work in//
im always out earning tryna get cheese like vermin//
lurking in the dark with more blades then a surgeon//
if i catch you in my ends after 10, then its curtains//

I aint an internet gangster, ive never let off shots//
but if i could id slit your throat & bust case like amanda knox//
My phone ring so much youd think im shotting rocks//
If i was then youd know it cos your profit drops//
U.T.I : Under The Influence
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lyrical1
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Good rhyme, I like the concept, you should do track about this and keep it going from this flow
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i enjoyed this keep writing homie
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