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The Gonz
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I'm flattered yer favorite rapper came to my page just to say he's wacker/
Than any phrase I've rapped even when you play it backwards/
In fact, that's why I act funny...
Like a crash dummy strapped to a crack junkie dashin with the last of yer stash money/
I'm that hungry, these nerds are weak tryin to verbally murder me/
But yall encourage me to disperse the heat til yer burned in the third degree/
See now yer learnin that turnin cheeks to the Hercules of rap/
Will get you slapped so hard you'll need surgery to work yer teeth/
so show some courtesy, I ain't perfect but I deserve to be/
If ya got the nerve to speak, be careful, I'm the werewolf in a herd of sheep/
I'm certain these circus freaks can never tame a shark/
The bravest will have a change of heart and faint when my fangs rip their frames apart/
So when you claim yer smart when yer dull and I'm razor sharp/
Is like sayin a camera flash will damage cats more than a taser spark/
Save the fake remarks about the way you came and raised the bar/
When lyrically its clear to me that you don't know what the basics are/
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The Gonz wrote:so show some courtesy, I ain't perfect but I deserve to be/
If ya got the nerve to speak, be careful, I'm the werewolf in a herd of sheep/
I'm certain these circus freaks can never tame a shark/
The bravest will have a change of heart and faint when my fangs rip their frames apart/

this was flame i dig this wat i quoted was my fav 4 of tha verse
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This was a nice braggin verse. I liked the multiple syllable game you put, couple of dope lines so all in all its no verse of the century, but definitely a solid drop

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Post by leeroi green »

I tead it bar for bar backwards it is bananas

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