Paper Cuts To A Giant

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Paper Cuts To A Giant

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My words could magnify and put a larger picture to a bastards life
while you try to pass with lies, my dick is getting pacified
lips to genital, magnatized, my poetry alone is like a traffic light
I won't stop til' it's read, won't yield if I've surpassed the lines
all about green, that complies with the envy you had with drive
came out clean, sanatized and blessed as the platter arrived
revenge is a quaint dish, because when I'm finished and stimulated
I get rid of the waste quick, and dispense them through my anus
now your style has originated, so quit thinking that we on the same shit
I made this plain and simple so some idiots can claim it's basic
you'll be remaining nameless until they tag you with a Wal Mart badge
even then things won't end nicely for you, even with a Hallmark ad
I have an all star swag, I pick, assist then call shots man..
killing tracks and leaving half blood prints, I got that Hogwarts fam
getting your girl in an awkward stance, lookin' like aardvarks...damn
flippin' her body like parkour and then giving you those orderbs man...
since you like to talk guns so much, you could get a few slugs to munch
other then that here's a huge fuck you plus a reason I should give two fucks...

Your portrayal was Kain to Abel, your style alone ain't enabled
to make a sale, blaming trails of your past for forsaken fails
women say you frail, puttin' hands to em' will you make you disabled
placed in jail or just blamed as male's counterpart deranged & pale
fame's ya tale, but you never came correct so you saved face and bailed
tried to change the way you'll do things by creating fables..
suckin' Moby's dick, enjoying sperm is how you gonna save the whales??
if your games prevail, I'll gladly step down and say you fatal....

as paper cuts to a giant...
shoulda stayed fuckin' silent

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I loved the your multi game man, the message was dope. Keep exposing the fake shit and do your thing. My only problem was that there were a few lines with flows I couldn't catch on to, but other than that it was great! Keep working!

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thanx man

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this is pretty dope nice use of vocab solid flow keep droppin
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