The Fallen....

[QwarterZ]

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KwdaU7rfowo[/video]

Guided through the light transaction follow through like peril
death to life, life to death the body carries gold like a Pharoah
if ever the flip sides on my, I hold their future quite like the tarot
swing with might, take flight to the heavens ask God for new apparel
a new life, from bottom of the barrell to hangin' on top of the line
all of that talking is fine, as long as y'all ain't talking bout mine
I twist this herbal, complete my cycle by moving like socket wrenches...
combined with the hottest wenches, I fuck lifestyles up with the hottest of rhymes
confuse the melodic with the prophet, divide your stacks up and profit
align my sight on the snipers, dust off presidentials, JFK's topless
mind moves through the deepest of projects, stimulates wisdom and knowledge
on in the same based on the way you should be choosin' to acknowledge
jump of cliffs into the waters that rise off the acension of the moons orbit
consider me, Arthur when he was swordless, slicin' rocks for my importance
rise like the sun, and see me shine like one when I start performin'
I make calls off the cordless, to off these performers for sleepin' on QwarterZ
tooth fairy's should be hung like Cartman, you couldn't imagine the darkness
back where I started, switchin' lines up cuz y'all lack that as artists
y'all should be I.D'd and carded for steppin' in the vicinity, departed
quicker then DiCaprio, witness the manifold break and fall cold hearted
sink ships Titanic, fall by Atlantis and find yourself lost in society
all the writtens is lies to me, they don't witness the true life and see..
the realism of capitalizin' off of reality, so I sat back watchin' idly...
thinkin' things would change but I guess that's just another far cry from me
stuck in the wilderness, tryna find the nearest location for service
dedicate my life work to music, while y'all stay cashin' in and splurgin'
thinkin' diamond rings and things gonna get you to God I can provide purpose
as another clip is inserted, but that isn't my style for the wack it's inertia
push come the shove, find the inner workin's of man is to be perfect
solidify hisself into society as a King, or possibly a changer of things
play a stranger to rings, Lebron James I never said this is my finals
the never writ raps like I do, break backs and remove their spinal
spin like vinyls, ride like cycles, cause you to age quick like time will
I'm moving at a different rate, still tryna decide if rap is my callin'
until then remember me as the fallen, until I feel like it this is just a warnin'....

[vanity]

“Guided through the light transaction follow through like peril
death to life, life to death the body carries gold like a Pharoah
if ever the flip sides on my, I hold their future quite like the tarot
swing with might, take flight to the heavens ask God for new apparel”

^^^ loved how u started this!

“a new life, from bottom of the barrell to hangin' on top of the line
all of that talking is fine, as long as y'all ain't talking bout mine”

^^^ great lines all of the talking is fine as long as u dont talk bout mine lol nice

“align my sight on the snipers, dust off presidentials, JFK's topless
mind moves through the deepest of projects, stimulates wisdom and knowledge
on in the same based on the way you should be choosin' to acknowledge”

^^^ brilliant

“I make calls off the cordless, to off these performers for sleepin' on QwarterZ
tooth fairy's should be hung like Cartman, you couldn't imagine the darkness
back where I started, switchin' lines up cuz y'all lack that as artists
y'all should be I.D'd and carded for steppin' in the vicinity, departed
quicker then DiCaprio, witness the manifold break and fall cold hearted
sink ships Titanic, fall by Atlantis and find yourself lost in society”

^^^ love how u included the departed and dicaprio thought it was great!

“all the writtens is lies to me, they don't witness the true life and see..
the realism of capitalizin' off of reality, so I sat back watchin' idly...
thinkin' things would change but I guess that's just another far cry from me”

^^^ very well said

“stuck in the wilderness, tryna find the nearest location for service
dedicate my life work to music, while y'all stay cashin' in and splurgin'
thinkin' diamond rings and things gonna get you to God I can provide purpose

^^^ great lines

"play a stranger to rings, Lebron James I never said this is my finals
the never writ raps like I do, break backs and remove their spinal
spin like vinyls, ride like cycles, cause you to age quick like time will
I'm moving at a different rate, still tryna decide if rap is my callin'
until then remember me as the fallen, until I feel like it this is just a warnin'...."

^^^ i loved how u ended it!

great writing this is the kind of writing that makes me want to continue trying to improve! very creative, nice flow, multis, great vocab just very impressed with it..... great job!

this is the 3rd time i read it trying to leave u feed but kept getting logged and it was all deleted ugh but well worth it i enjoyed it!

[Defiance]

this chit reminded me of some Nas shit

for real had solid flow too and it.. and good content.. not overplayed at the least..

always like your bars there usually well constructed and well thought out..

keep dropping homie

[QwarterZ]

Hey thanx peeps