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Yo, Let the ryhthm kick, and quickly harden your wounds
got lost in the fumes, there never was a god in the tomb
i often resume, empty souls show no caution in wombs
options assumed, lonely lives lost as the marksmen consumes
inhale the toxins of doom, but my thoughts are gravely supreme
rarely it seems, this world turns but its barely extreme
strangely i dream, about the children lost in the daily routine
its namely the theme, innocent deaths by mainly the schemes
crazy between, carry no basic purpose but barely a teen
fairly they scream, a mothers tears appear vaguely in streams
it's a necesary esteem, to be forever remembered
burned wherever the ember, with bullets lost up in the center
they found the body stabbed, but he was never a member
whenever you enter, keep in mind we dwell in december
censor the sender, then allow me to rewind the journal
intertwined but hurtfull, my whole design is verbal
word to the fallen soldiers, my state of mind is purple

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i often resume, empty souls show no caution in wombs
options assumed, lonely lives lost as the marksmen consumes
inhale the toxins of doom
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this shit was really good.. great multis hitting the flow on every angle and good content.. enjoyed reading it.. and its good to see ya back always enjoy your shit. but on one tip try to keep the energy you started with continuing throughout the piece

Good shit keep writing
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word up, thnx. and i ll keep that in mind for sure
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