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The Killa Heist.. *A Super Collab*... DO NOT SLEEP

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~THE KILLA HEIST~
~A Story Of Friendship Betrayal and Greed~
~Directed by.. ENLIGHTEND~


ITS SUPER LONG BUT READ THIS IT IS WORTH IT
COULD BE THE COLLAB OF THE DECADE...


part 1......the heist


DAT NI**A REDD

after months of plannin', the caper is in action
and up to this point, it has met satisfaction
multi-taskin', gettin' ready for my turn
to complete my job, as my eyes start to burn
from the smoke and dust in the explosion
wipe my brow, grab my tools, put my stage into motion
i gotta crack this Israeli safe within 4 minutes...
and its complex as hell to get in it
a sheet of glass in the door is used for security
if it breaks, the safe will lock up then it will be
impossible to get in......
so i gotta find the precise spot before i start drillin'
begin to drill, into the door of the safe...
bout halfway in, i can feel the glass break
but it didn't break all the way, just my luck....
i fucked up, now i gotta use my touch
as i try to crack it, i see fear in my boys
gotta concentrate, look out for ambient noise
i break the combination, and hear the locks click
open the door, to find the safe fully stocked kid
2 shelves are jewels, the rest is straight cash
my job is done, bag the loot, break fast....
PE got escape plans smoother than Luther(luther vandross)
"WE DID IT MY NIGGA" is what i yell out to Future



FUTURE (IMMINENT FUTURE)

the intelligence its evident killa gave the scoop on gettin dead presidents//
see we been killin thugin and sellin shit ever-since//
now we some time bombs tickin liftin plots-then-droppin-um//
got PE in the ride watchin for cops-and-poppin-um//
this place doesnt allow birds but my unknown eagles were-exceptions//
now imm here burning air with flares, entire place learning-lessons//
in back redd at the stash wit tools, got the jewels, now bastards-are-buckin-arms//
so i turn runnin wit colorful stones, like they after-my-lucky-charms//
fuck i have ta drop the loot and shoot, now slow mo enters my-brain//
but red grabs the sack a stones and cash now im jus tryin ta maintain//
see all the homies know me, an u know we down ta the brittle-end//
now 'leave the blastin ta me', i turn and the bullets start ta cripple-men//
........( RED: PE LETS GO FUTURES BOUT TA TEAR IT OPE........)........
i reload and start blastin before the end of his sentence//
hot lead enters the security members now centered at the entrance//
dismembered their neck-nerves, heads served with vengeance//
then i swerve quick diving through slugs aimed straight at my dome//
yall bitches just cant compete with the heat from this chrome//
now peace is alone , as i brought sin an savage within me//
i see skin slathered with envy as i blast um with semi's//
now all around me bodys drop-in split seconds, and slow mo stops-quick//
out the door turn the corner picked up in a flash.........
nigga i left a note on there ass you've just been robbed-bitch//


part 2.....the get away.....


DAT NI**GA REDD

SON WE DID IT, can't believe we got away wit it
after the safe, i almost shitted....
i'll even admit it, i had doubts we could pull it off...
Especially how niggas was lettin' bullets cough...
yo this nigga Future is crazy...
when he dropped the loot my first thought was grab my 380
but he started lettin' off, wettin' up shop
so obviously, my next thought was gettin' the gwap
grabbed the jewels and the loot, made my way to the coupe
saw PE in the car cocked, ready to shoot
hopped in the whip, grabbed my heat popped in a clip
then Future comes out back first yellin' LET'S DIP!!!
so i started buckin', to give Future cover
he jumped in the ride, and PE burned rubber...
doin' a buck and some change, swirvin' traffic
drove over a bridge and threw away the plastic
now we at the spot and we countin' the stash...
i'm still paranoid so i'm blazin the hash
took a toak, blew the smoke, thinkin' back on the caper
PE yelLs out, LOOK AT ALL THIS PAPER !!!
"yo the plan went well, we just gave it to these fools"
adrenaline pumpin', though i try to play it cool...
thinkin' about how we gonna fence these jewels
i know a couple dudes that can make a couple moves
Future asks me,"whats the trouble dude, you straight ?"
i chuckle then say, "yeah, but i got a tooth ache"
thinkin' that this shit ain't over, just you wait...
fuck it, "yo PE throw on that Clue tape"



part 3.........tha after math

ENLIGHTEND

phone rings: its k illa the casino was just robbed......
................no words i just look at the phone and press end
now filled with murderous intent do these kids know what i represent
must not cause my casinos been robbed by 2 black dudes an a Mexican
staring at the surveillance screen thinkin bout bringing death ta them
cus im cold set,on 3 culprits these cats future, PE an redd hid under masks'
call dude right back, how did u not see these punks sneak attack
.............somthin up cause this cat, he aint answer that

not long after..............

the don E approaches the seen tux suit cane and umbrella hat
explain ta me what happin kid, all the facts.... who dare robb the don
so pissed im bout ta bring a heat wave till the crops r gone
now im sendin out the search led by a cold blooded K ILLA
got the mob on a mission...lookin for thugs, g's and drug dealers
plus a couple a marksmen markin targets like when sharks swim
blood attracts da mack, fuck wit my cash, and a coffins what ya gon be barred in
cus i run this town don E with a straight k illa by my side
tracking down these outlaws, there gone feel it when we ride



part 4........in it for the money

K ILLA

Im Sick of beein this bitch Lackey..I want that CASH-BACK-FO-ME..when I catch up wit them 3 niggaz Im SNATCHIN-N-GRABBIN N Im up like PEACE..Casinos make Madd G..homey can AFFORD THE LOSS..but if he keep talkin shit to me imma SWORD-THE-BOSS..lissin PIG U can ride wit me or STEP-OFF..cuz when I find em three..Im takin the Cheez N PRESS-OFF..what U ain know I set this GAME-UP..didn't give me a raise "So Hey"..I CAME-UP..But them 3 fucks don't HIT-ME-UP..Im findin they Family N turnin Grannies tits to TEA-CUPS..I got money problems N my LEAS-UP..U can roll wit me Mr. Police..WE-CAN-SEE-BUCKS that Stack Up like TREE-TRUNKS..Im talkin Mills..I mean Big BIlls..the type of Skrill that can get U N ya KIds some BIG-WHEELS..THIS-SHITS-REAL

detectives AC is feelin k illas offer.............

Imma KILL-AT-WILL fo CASH-LIKE-THAT..I'd crack my own moms wit a BASEBALL BAT..N get to buckin so much I'll MAKE-JAKE-FALL-BACK Im tryin to get money that make kilo DOUGH look like 8-BALL-SCRATCH..any Cakes N my Way N I'll MAKE-YALL-FLAT..I got a AK N the TRUNk along wit a TREY-8 N A PUMP I got three names on a list N Im WAITIN-TA-THUMP..So U can get in MY-WAY-IF-YA-WANT..Cuz Son Im willin to go War wit the Mob..these whores is livin like Gods N ya rollin Saabs when U can roll May-bach N get it Poppin N Dobs..Me N u homey lets hop in the Wip.."Hears my Gloc..Just Pop in the Clip N lets Get to CHOPPIN-THEM-TRICKS



AC MONEY (3rd String QB)

so I agreed to disgrace my badge, I need to make ends meet~
sargent suspects im wrong so im quiet even if friends speaks//
gave moneymaker the call that K Illa decided to give us a job~
started drawing the plan it was crook niggas we would rob//
I know these niggas keep mad cash in box filled with raw crack~
we need to set plots to distract them so he can take all that//
*knock at the door* it was money with a floor plan in his pocket~
so to arm the nigga I gave him a pistol so he could cock it//
drove past the house to spy on these niggas in my cop car~
looked in the window to scope and they livin like rock stars//
went back and told money the time of day they leave at night~
told him to let me make a distraction so his actions go right//
had to make the details flawless since im the nigga rollin the dice~
if he stays in the set order then the stacks we holdin is nice//




MONEY MAKER (CALICO)


Therre I was late Night Patrol….How imma get my Money Back from Last Night,
All I needed was a Seven on that Dice Roll….Shitt unsettling some Old English might help it Pass Right.

MM'S CELL PHONE RINGS : yo its ac i got a plan 4 u and me, shits off the wall......

Wild Ideas about what I would do with the Jewelery….imma take it straight back to the Casino Hall,
Im unconscious of my Cruelty…imma Cop since when I need Credibility to justify when I do Wrongg?

When I get those Rocks imma ‘Gett-on some Fun’ while my Money sore like the ‘Figgures Caught the Runs”
No Morre persecutingg those as “Felonies they aint done”..but about these Robbers...what if these ‘Niggerrz have Guns?!”

Imma be paid real soon oh so Crazy when I meet up with My Partnahh A.C.,
Yeahh our Plann is real Shady …but I guess datts the Price to Gett Style like Macy’s.

Doesn’t Matterr all of them getting Capped no Matterr what,
Al SharptoN caint stopp me on this one so imma have them Splaterred and Run.

It is all about me in the end…imma Smash one of the Diamonds and say they were all Destroyed,
My Gunn is the Final Solution…ill leave them Down in Defeat and ill make The News Head Storry.

Out herre in this Patrol Carr aint goin NoWherre….imma be the ‘Precinct’s Fast Top Commanderr’,
Because these Criminals aint no how it really goes….They should ‘See my Badge rides over theirr Bandanas’.

So im off on this Mission this Opprotunity is ‘Wide Open’,
And imma have my New Rocks lined up…like it was StoneHenge.



PART 5........sucsessfull?



FUTURE (IMMINENT FUTURE)

3 thugs tryin ta chill after blood spilt, grin-an-smile//
got bitches in my jacuzzi touchin my uzi, man its been-i-while//
yep its kick back time, just relaxin after the hiest//
got some bitches in my 'studio' tryin ta touch my mic//
red senses trouble, like his head is in touch wit other-dimensions//
then i here talks by the door that dude killa, wit louder-suspicions//
i grab the heat and listen, it was all bout-our-mission//
confused because what he said was it starts with our ending//
daym E's henchmen been after it all from the very begining//
thats the plot we went too the door 9 shots//
opened it and shit got hot cus we found "MM" shit a dead cop//
we need ta get the fuck out so we headin for the car-quick//
but we was trapped 30 niggaz my head went blank i almost lost-it//
it came back ta me.....shot quick we buckin in reality//
causin casualties, and redd was there telling-me//
grab perpetual admidity, hes hit shit, i take um bleeding//
deceinin proceedins missleadin, i cant believe what im seein//
my team its fallin, me and red hit but still-cappin//
we tryin ta reach the car but PE's brain still-spasms//
his eyes fall shut fuck i still feel-um-squeezin//
lead in his chest, close ta death but i can still hear-um-breathin//
now im left with one vest, fuck it i give it ta pe//
threw um in a closet popped a nigga then at my left i see-three//
red, future, pe and a bad setting, damn it seems like our endin//
how can we fall, we been in sinnins since the beginning//
red said fuck-limbs-missin gaspin shit never been up-in-the-mission//
i ask red for a decision "keep blastin" so im buckin-limpin//

...........(guns stop blastin, future turns 2 find red)............

but blood floods the seen and its unknown who lays dead//
bleeding profusely i look up see the K Illa an fire but here click-instead//
he was gone i heard a beep, it put us 2 sleep n blew our crib-ta-shreds//
in one quick flash, it seem we niggaz have fallin//
hearin screams, dreams ring with empty voices calling//

damn



part 6........at the dawns end-a new day


ENLIGHTEND


kid called and made me an offer i cant turn down
but my guns wanna bust cuz my patients been burnt out
way past midnight in an ally, don meetin wit da enemy
an greet who he send ta me, but first im a' scope tha vicinity
heard leaves crack, turned back pointed straight to his dome
he froze cold, still like stone, shook from my chrome
and just as i was gonna blast i felt a bat ta my knee cap
an a couple a slug missed, then they was off with ski caps
gave chase down the ally, then lost um to the dark
walked back pulled out a Cuban stuffed it an sparked
goin to my jeep in da park, as a bum hit it wit a shoppin cart
set off the c-4 that was stashed in my whip, now they bomb in my cars
i flew back an dropped da mack, da wave rushed ta my chest
on my back blood fillin my eyes blurry but i see figures ahead
as quick as i reach for the pistol they fill my sternum wit lead
chest burnin I turn n see 3 guys that i thought that was dead
the bloodied pavement a legends the don E's final bed

u prolly wanna know.........

so...... 3 BROTHERS had all the money in the end/
staged tha murder of each other and stabbed tha backs of friends/
and for money an power they left their own people 4 dead/
unknown allies filled wit greed an deceit AC, K ILLA an DAT NIGGA REDD/




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so don't try an bite cause not only is it wrong
ITS AGAINST THE LAW
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ok im not goin read this now cuz i have to go but heres a lil tip for you

not many people will leave you feed on this since it is so long i say you break it down in parts like you have and post each part as its own post dont post them all at once post part 1 up for like a day or 2 then part to then just edit the link into them so you can go from one to the other.... becuz one most ppl dont want to read this much at once and plus by the time they finish they have forgotten what was said at the first parts so if you want better feed id say break it down into parts...
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^I say fuck that bullshit. If you wrote a long, nice ass piece, post it as one so people can get the entirety of your work.
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this thing is mad long, but this is like my third time reading it lol... bring these dudes fool
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I'm only feeding your verses, Light, because it's a kindness you've extended to me, and I don't really have the time at work to read the entire piece as a whole and construct feed for everyone. I felt your emotional imagery and actions described within the verses was on point for the character you chose to represent. Props, bruh. Indeed. A Don is a powerful position to write from, because there are so many ways you COULD go with it, but once you set the wheels in motion, only one way you really CAN come with it in order to stay true to yourself an the persona you've crafted. Excellent job here, man. This, at least on your part thus far in my mind, was a great piece. Stay up.
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