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CrazyPete
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Sorry to post two back to back, but I think the first was pretty weak. This one may be a little better, but then I'm new to this so I may be off base...

Keep moving, but always tread light
imprints on the ground lead to enemies sight
& thought...are they following me?
Split track, double back, spin 90 degree

glance around now, but try to be subtle
they could be resigned, no need to bust their bubble
Don't want any trouble, just sifting through the rubble
In this mind while my dreams keep growing like some stubble

On my chin, but where to begin?
I think I lost 'em, slow underneath their bling bling
ring ring... alarm sounds and Ka-Ching
Dollar signs in their eyes and in their hearts will be Kings

When they find me, with their fists they will pound
Face body head, but I may still astound
For I travel light, keep close to the ground
Motivated by fright, ears perk at each sound

See I've been roaming deep, long in a foreign land
keep these elite with two in bush, none in hand
& I will keep on shuffling and shambling on my way
Tricks up my sleave let me see one more day.
Last edited by CrazyPete on Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:32 am, edited 1 time in total.
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