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NoVeL
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No Time

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ITS BEEN SOME TIME, I'LL ADMIT, ONLINE, FOR MAPPED EVENTS
THE CASH YEAR (CASHIER) NEVER RANG UP 'CHANGE', IN THIS GAME I'LL SMACK A BITCH, THE FACT OF IT, ITS HUSTLE QUICK, STRONG ARMS,
MUSCLE MILK'S BEEN MASSIVE SINCE, THE BIRTH OF TIME WITH CAPTAIN CRUNCH AND BAGS OF KIXX'S
AND I COULD NEVER GET USED TO THIS, BEING DAZED GOT ME FEELIN' WAYS, RE VERB FOR A DEAL & PLAYS OF NEEDED CAKE, THE MAN DEFINES THE MEAL YOU MAKE, HE STOLE MY MILK FOR AN EASY SHAKE, TEARS EXPLAIN, MY NEEDS TODAY, AND WHY THE FUCK I FEEL THIS WAY, THE 'SWEETEST THING', MY LOVE FOR RAP'S AS REAL AS GRAPES, SEE 'PROPER-TIES' ARE ORGANIC FOR SEALED DISPLAY

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This woulda been dope if it was longer..and had a bit of structure
I'm not really feeling these short drops it's just weird brah..
either way nice little usage of the multi's :)

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