Barack O'Drama (My Civil Rights Story)

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Barack O'Drama (My Civil Rights Story)

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Yo...


Verse 1:

Martin Luther da king did his thing so I could wear bling
But these racist crackaz want to see me locked in da bing

So i stays strapped foe dat drama
I sets da blak people free like Barack Obama

Chorus:

See me rolling on twenty-foe inch rims
Obama be blak, dat's why I voted foe him

Verse 2:

One day man I'm a be dead and buried
Black hissry munf be in february
My style stay dope like Marion Berry

Chorus:

See me rolling on twenty-foe inch rims
Obama be blak, dat's why I voted foe him

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Amazing

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10/10 bro where did you get those skills?
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lol this is amazing
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this an instant written classic... :clap: :clap:
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Shit, this is fucking amazing lmao good shit bro.. I wan to see more!
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You're on a different level homie...top tier shit!!! Can't wait for volume or chapter 2...

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Terrible.
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Thanks, everyone, for feeding this terrible shit, while perfectly good pieces are left un-fed.

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Could you mentor me? I can't write classics like this. Alvin, don't be mad because this man could teach you some lyrical skills.
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Thanks, everyone, for feeding this terrible shit, while perfectly good pieces are left un-fed.


Sounds like that time of the month for somejuan.......hmmmm

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