These days

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These days

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these days that seem to fade to grey
then state your pain when you ask me to stay
i can see in your face that longing gaze
when you say your ok i know its just a charade
and i hate to say i must leave today
its just these games you play you seem to prey
and all these days that fade to grey
seem to suffocate me like a citizen of pompey


just keystyling tell me what you think and if i should finish it
Keep comments to yourself cause I heard enough chatter,
hang you by ya throat wit a rope soaked in venom of a Puff Adder
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