Theres actually two freestyles, both different subjects, also I might be a bit rusty, haven't writ anything in a while, anyone feedback would be nice thanks.
The Riots: Listened to 2Pac - Runnin' Instrumental
Fires blazin', shits ravin' isn't it amazin' how police were just gazin',
I'm raisin' in the makin' this gamin' got me chasin', windows were just breakin'
people runnin' not enough lovin' people huffin' and puffin', hearts pumpin'
people crushin', police doublin' town was floodin' people were smugglin'
smash, someone dashed with cash in a flash, buildings burnt down to ash
people got the bash, people got the slash, broken glass even maybe harass,
lifes a mistery, but this will go down in history quickly, sight wasn't pretty,
cars crispy, no gulity, people thought eh no biggie, they don't care about the city,
Me Bragging: Listened to Pharoahe Monch - Simon Says Instrumental
This is isn’t quoted this is wroted with poet associated with me motivated, exploded,
your outdated deflated and constipated I’m not overrated underrated I’m X rated,
my delivery drops bombs like the military I’m steadly patienly ready to go deadly,
get cheeky I’ll make your body go quickly crispy, watch out I’m on a killing spree,
The Riots [Quick Freestyle]
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The Riots [Quick Freestyle]
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K.O. Proverb,
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my rhymes are so real, they pop out the of speakers, and walk around the room," - Kulture
Re: The Riots [Quick Freestyle]
Not Bad Not Bad But I Guess Because Of The Structure,
It Just Seemed To Fast Too Read But Of Course Ive Never Heard To The Instrumental,
But It Just Seems More Of An Audio' Track To Me/
It Just Seemed To Fast Too Read But Of Course Ive Never Heard To The Instrumental,
But It Just Seems More Of An Audio' Track To Me/
Re: The Riots [Quick Freestyle]
I like, I can definitely hear this over that instrumental. That's one of my favorite songs by Monch to so make sure you kill that shit yo. lol
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Re: The Riots [Quick Freestyle]
Thanks for the feedback, and in a way it would of been a audio track, but it was short, so thats why I called it a freestyle.
K.O. Proverb,
"my crimes are so unreal, I rob leaders sneakers, stay on them like I'm perfume,
my rhymes are so real, they pop out the of speakers, and walk around the room," - Kulture
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