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Above Yall

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dropping the book from altars leaving crooks shook in water
as i took your daughters, fathers, mothers and brother walter
dropping another shocker, give me a beat?? you better call a doctor
im back with some more to offer, choppin beats like a helicopter
out of my shell a monster! HOT? shit... even in hell i prosper
destroying all you frail impostors, with charisma in my written words
not ill you've only bitten herbs.. i"ll have you smiling an hittin curves
its history X when i'm rippin herds, all of my victims learn
that i hit an burn high on 3 wheels like i hit the switch and turn
compared to V.D cause even you dicks will burn so pick your turn
jumping off the scripted surf, mass produced and out the doors
cry babies go ahead and pout sum more.. im armed an shouting WAR
im rising like the ammount thats poor, fuckin off til your mouth is sore
so complex even in a drought i pour, mi amor in this hip hop shit
i slip the clip than spit pissed an poppin lips your spit not as sick
while i leave the grid lock split, wide open leavin a smoking trail
i go with soul you just roll an fail, bumby like you wrote in brail
while you chase your tale. staying stale an i get fresher by the minute
you under pressure why so timid.. i fly by living i do a drive by in it
a workin wordsmith cause i deny my limits.. while you holding back
prone to lay them golden raps... never holdin fast the new HOV is back
ripping shitting and never holding back, stacked like im above it
i drop it down and youll love it... im at the top and havent hit the summit
a professional and im not even funded, and i'll never stop or plummet
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Post by Arvincible »

above who? ;p

good stuff bro i see lots of improvement!!

I just love it when my mind is buzzin with shit to drop..
i know u know the feeling when i came to this piece
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GOOD SHIT HERE, DEFIANCE YOU'VE COME A LONG WAY!! THE MOST COMMENDABLE PART OF THE DROP
dropping another shocker, give me a beat?? you better call a doctor
im back with some more to offer, choppin beats like a helicopter
out of my shell a monster! HOT? shit... even in hell i prosper
HAD ME LIKE WHOA!! GREAT STUFF MAN

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Epic Flow. Shit read really nicely
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Post by leeroi green »

Yo you stay smashing Def my net is down I wish I could break this down I will when I get to a computer but you'll notice I been posting via mobiles but I appreciate how active you are bro it motivates please keep it up
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Punchlines were ill as shit!

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thanks fellas

upping
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