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Like the other shit I've seen you drop this is pure dope man.
I really love your writing style. Your inspiring ;)
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The flow in this piece is excellent ... this is probably one of my favorite drops ... I really have a way of letting out your emotions through your writin ... overall , this was dopeeee !

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nice, great use of multis and awesome flow loved it!

loved these lines ;


Spitting admissions of visions he held inside,
Bled and cried, salt and crimson, demons exorcised,

Spilling his pride, pad, pen, grim looks in his eyes,
Went to war against himself, fully militarized,

Relished the ride, no telling if he was dead or alive,
Emerged spitting blades, a surgical edge in his rhymes,
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Re: Notions

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Appreciate that, fam.
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Dope I love the rhymes and flow, nice.
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Post by 88SkyLink »

This was a really good written man, it was original, enjoyable and interesting, it sounded more poetic and archaic. A good read, keep it up..peace
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Re: Notions

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Thanks all, for the great feed.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Damn' Drop More Man that was a very good piece good use of multi's Great Job :clap:
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Re: Notions

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Thanks, Faze.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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