No Show Drop... BLAHHHHHH

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No Show Drop... BLAHHHHHH

Post by Enlightend »

i hate it when people no show i feel like it wasted my time... well not that this battle wasnt a waste of time anyways...

serious if your begging to battle someone good at least drop....

repost... for feed


look sport you been in 17 battles and only four your winnin.. so for short the premise
is... the rap game sure ur in it but da-feat-is all around you like an abortion clinic
check it... the truth is ya record isnt news.. and this aint me just messin with you
i think rap isnt what you was destined ta do.. maybe try investing into checkers my dude
so before ya rattle off a soft battle drop my suggestion for you is go missing like ya avatar
cus simple an plain i will dimple ya frame and ur face it dosn't need more battle scars
so keep ya lip up misses an u'll get ripped up vicious six bars ta leave ya system pillaged
yep i got more should i hit um with it? why moneymakers already shook like strip club bitches

fuck it im a finish ya off....

stick my pen in ya jaw just to give ur dentist a job ill have this peasant in aww
askin why u tried testin da boss... yep u was fishing fa wins but now ur ketchin a loss
so lets recap this lesson firstly that ur gay per se u need ta quit in the worst way
and the seconds a killa... that you will neva develop ta be as breath taking asthma word play
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Re: No Show Drop... BLAHHHHHH

Post by Meika »

Lmao @ rap isnt wasnt what youre destinted to do & so onto the checkers part lol really nice though

Joe you're a bitch quit no showing

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Re: No Show Drop... BLAHHHHHH

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Good drop the flow was a little off but a good drop. Keep it up.


@Meika i didnt even have a battle against him so shut your fucking mouth

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Post by Thu Hem »

str8 up murda ,....
i like it

and this line is dope as fuck:

stick my pen in ya jaw just to give ur dentist a job ill have this peasant in aww
askin why u tried testin da boss... yep u was fishing fa wins but now ur ketchin a loss

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joe saint you shut you're fucking mouth and stuff it with a dick bitch

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