Why Not

[DaPrince]

Verse 1:
I don't know why it happened but my passion for rappin'
was devoid of emotion, it seemed devotion was lackin'
all the crowds have been laughin' at my attempts at taking action
guess I'm a Rolling Stone cuz I can't get no satisfaction
Every time I'm in the booth I've been reduced to sitting back and
never being heard like my verse is just a distraction.
Tired of the games, the fakers, all the play-action,
it's time that my rhymes got some mic interaction
cuz me? I kill mics still with nyquil
cuz I'm ill but these emcees sleep on my skill
like for real? my style is untouchable
the throne was made for me and sadly it's not adjustable
so I'm cursin' these fools who think their verses are cool
on the surface they're worthless so i'm usurping their rule
spittin' third-degree burns so get your emergency tools
while I'm drippin with skills like i emerged from a pool.

verse 2:
As you can see I'm back with a better me, every shred of me
prays and hopes that this feeling will never leave
I was perched on the edge of a mountainous peak
looking down at the earth thinking the outcome was bleak,
ready to leap....but then I woke from my sleep
realized I had something inside of me that I needed to release
so see rhyming for me is an infectious disease
a sickness that can't be fixed with sixty-six I-Vs
and I might be the greatest since sliced bread wasn't cheap
or maybe I'm just an artist with the heart of Ali
either way it's my day so if you stand in my way
I hope your affairs are in order and you said all your prayers today
cuz I'm not stopping for anything anybody has to say
my mind is made up so til i'm laid in my grave
i'll never quit, give up or slip and let my passion be swayed
no matter what the situation it'll always remain

[Kau the Lion]

Not bad. Could've used some more metaphors or punchlines to spice it up. Not saying every piece needs them but I think this one could've used some. Flow was good for the most part but could use some tweaking here and there. Mainly in the second verse. The prayers line is the one that stands out. 1st flowed smoothly, though. The first verse seemed like a bit of a contradiction, though. You you lacked passion and essentially it was causing you to create shallow music. But then you said you were getting slept on. It wasn't until the second verse where you touched on making a turn-around. Overall, a decent piece. Better than average, I would say.