quick key.... mah fucka im ewwwwwww.....

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quick key.... mah fucka im ewwwwwww.....

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let me just say this....

im sooooo illllllll "illest lyrics" i ruuuunnnnnnnnn this.....

im a fuckin beast never hit the ground but im running streets, "yall sick" tongue n cheek
thats a damn pun indeed.... while i 'cook rhymes dat kill' call it under siege number three
im like dammit ya suck after dis verse gets ya, work together u'll need some bandaging up
like yall gonna stick in this.. dat 'shits a wish'... like u stuck Aladdins lamp in ya butt
ive been raw and my raps are ill while yall ass... but hell its more then ya lack of skills
so fall back yall wack and cant 'conceive this kids'.. my drop.. its the morning after pill
so yall illest noooooo.. and why not cus yall liars stop... and im 'Mos-illa' like fire fox
all u really do is cry alot so im takin ya best n 'break-in' there chest like im pryin locks
but hey its funny yall try ta hold weight but bitches its known that ya 'rhymes are so gay'
yep stay moving that dumb shit, musically rubbage thats 'usually suspect' like keyser soze



i feed tons of writtens but here are some links lol

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The first part was cool, don't get me wrong, but these bars were sick:
ive been raw and my raps are ill while yall ass... but hell its more then ya lack of skills
so fall back yall wack and cant 'conceive this kids'.. my drop.. its the morning after pill
so yall illest noooooo.. and why not cus yall liars stop... and im 'Mos-illa' like fire fox
all u really do is cry alot so im takin ya best n 'break-in' there chest like im pryin locks
but hey its funny yall try ta hold weight but bitches its known that ya 'rhymes are so gay'
yep stay moving that dumb shit, musically rubbage thats 'usually suspect' like keyser soze

Like the Usual Suspects reference, sick movie, And the Mozilla one, lol some of this shit was funny and tight at the same time. Cool drop, now feed this shit and another piece and post it on here.

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Post by Joe Saint »

This was dope. Flow was on point . Keep it up

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Post by Kau the Lion »

Nice punchlines. Morning after pill was mu fav. Flow was nice too. Good use of inner multies. Overall,I'd give it an 8 out of 10.
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Post by Defiance »

yeah i like you punches not a simple like most mo fuckers. good for a quick key.. got some intelligence to your shit.
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