The mind of a incestual predator

[32neilz]

You think your sick, I'm in a whole other class// spiked my nans drink and raped her in the ass// didn't lube it up man- there was no grease// pulled out and made her lick her shit off my piece// laughed as she was choking// held her hubby at gunpoint and recieved another stroking// made him swallow the fluid that I spat// then scratched he's eyes out like an agitated cat// I listen to the voices in my head// the ones that say my family should be dead// hitman for free- require no bread// run up with carrier bags and suffocate my wife as she sleeps in her bed// rape the cold corpse with no remorse// keep it for a year and fuck it again--- of course// rotten flesh wrapped around my dick// bust inside and create a zombie kid//

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-- Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:00 pm --

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[Tha Dark Prince]

lol wtf this is dope tho, creative good flow and imagery is good, liked the last bar best

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[Vohkab]

definitely on a horrorcore vibe here.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.

[MonuMental]

It was sick and demented, but that only means you hit the concept dead on the head. I enjoyed it, but I think you should revisit this verse and make it longer, really go in depth on the sickness that breeds inside your mind. That shit would be dope. Tight drop, bruh.

[32neilz]

Yppin

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-- Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:58 am --

Uppin

[Kulture]

I love horrorcore, flow and imagination in this man but the first line was funny and sick in the head lmao,, thats what I love to see keep it up bro.

[Defiance]

lol dont rape your moms man.. thats fucked up on several levels of fucked.. but this shit made me laugh and be shocked at the same time..

fix the structure, i find my self reading it instead of flowing it.. which has to do with the paragraph style of writing.. but keep dropping neilz