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something i dropped a while ago....
never really finished it maybe i will this time around...

this is where it ends and starts....
i hear an echo a shot rendering the beginning of my ending
people yelling and that's when i really start remembering
the world stops spinning time slows down thats when my reaction happens
my chest feels like stabbing glass... then i start having spasms
arms wildly grabbing now I'm gasping but no air can enter ma lungs
it seems my destiny's sung, a sad song? we will pretend it was one
any ways my presence was done just then a man appears an extends his hand
so i grab it an stand and then i take a long look back at my fam
trying 2 revive me as best as they can but i ain't coming back
cus even tho only seconds have passed one of my lungs collapsed
then the man lets out a cunning laugh an says Damian my son is back
now my minds running laps i kno this man but the memory is unexact

this ain't real...

and you ain't my father cause that guy he aint alive
you got the wrong kid my dad died when i was five
ur just a dying minds final spark, a dream, just a thought

u think im in your head i can assure you son i'm not
u cant be me because its a fact ur lungs would break
cause the combustion rate of my breath is something great
its said my mind is sick thoughts a sorrow intertwined with bliss
but the sun moon n stars all have still derived from it
n I could crush it all with the weight of my iron fist
because the thought of a false god has left me hated
forgetful so im call the devil by what I have created
once forgiving but now my mind is filled with hatred

what about the testaments the scriptures gods own words were spoken...

no!!!! god is just a notion created by man to keep him going
it was i that opened the sky's flooded the earth n created oceans
I birthed Adam, Eve and planted seeds that budded the garden of Eden
I am father time and mother earth combined in a single being
i am knowledge, reason, life and also the change of seasons
all while a mere man wrote the bible that u believe in

-- Thu Jun 02, 2011 7:42 pm --

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Whoa.... you were right... this shit is getting slept on.

First off, great fuckin job.
Vocabulary mixed with the imagry on this is right on point man. Nice story and concept too, this is like some shit that you don't read everyday fa real... this is some good shit with a nice flow to go along with it.

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Yo man, It was a dope fucking piece and it really captured the essence of confusion and sorrow, imo. Only thing I can't speak on is the god part. I won't go there, bruh, but the rest of this joint was fuckin sick, my guy.
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good shit man, flow was off for most of it, seem to change with every string of rhymes.. but i like this shit makes me think of some shit i've wrote keep it up my dude
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