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It Vibes Within'em,
Rides At Sides The Dirty Streets, Cry With Rhythm,
Decides A Victim,
This Is A Horrible Place To Raise Anything, Besides Suspicion,
The Lies Have Risen,
Defies The Cries He Try's To Slide A Vision,
Describes His Mission,
It Drives His Mind To Such High's To Twist In,
But Find Whats Given?
The Rhymes Confide In Lines Entwined In Prisons,
Mines A Prism,
The Signs That Shine Are Designed With Wisdom,
To Distract A Thought,
React With Rats Vast To Contrast Rappourt,
The Facts Distraught,
Off Track With Raps In The Past He's Caught,
Detached From All,
Sad That His Slack Has Cracked The Wall,
Fast It Falls,
Crash To The Mats Where Disasters Call,
But Reality's Twisted,
Humanity Filled With Vanity, Demands But He Missed It,
His Insanity's Gifted,
Just A Plan To Be Mad At Me When Abmormality Hits Shit,
So Refer To A Notion,
Not Differ When I Turn It's To Learn From The Ocean,
So Absurd With Emotion,
He Burned What He Earned Til He'd Confirm What Was Chosen,
The Road Lead Him Far,
Cold With An Aroma That Arose From The Start,
To Hold In Remark,
Golden But When It's Stolen You Were Home In The Dark,
As Spirits Demonstrate,
The Finish To Diminish And You Hear It In His Wake,
Near It With Such Pace,
It's The Image In His Lyrics That Brought Cynics To The Gate,
He Was, Grown With A Passion,
Unknown In His Home And Alone With His Actions,
Prone To Imagine,
His Zone That He'd Control If Thrown Into Sanctum,
But His Soul Is The Ransom,
A Hole In The Role But The Goal Is The Answer
Chose A Romancer,
Fold But It's Sold That What Molds Him A Cancer
Drowning His Sorrows,
Hounding The Poundings Simply Found In Tomorrows,
Soundings Of Hollows,
Rounding & Clowning Astounding What Follows
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Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
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Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
Dude thats epic...
Your multies off the hook...
Nothing bad to be said about this piece.
9/10
Your multies off the hook...
Nothing bad to be said about this piece.
9/10
Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
You went in on this homie. Love the multies and diverse rhyme schemes. Had some good imagery too so its nice to see that the rhymes didnt really seem forced and the content limited. Good shit bro. Rolled right of the tongue and almost chugged with rhythm.
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Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
well, i was recitin this out loud and my co worker over heard me. now he thinks im a genius lyricist. thank you for that. haha. awesome piece
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
yo what you been doing.. studying hip hop under KRS one..
this shit was bonkers.. long as fuck.. but strongly lyrical liked it
keep coming with that fire
this shit was bonkers.. long as fuck.. but strongly lyrical liked it
keep coming with that fire
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Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
wow Mutual youve stepped up alot since i last peeped you out...flo is pretty epic on this one..
rythm and schemes are lined up ..like a coke party..dope!!
love da concept and really dug the finshing thoughts....
Unknown In His Home And Alone With His Actions,
Prone To Imagine,
His Zone That He'd Control If Thrown Into Sanctum,
But His Soul Is The Ransom,
A Hole In The Role But The Goal Is The Answer
Chose A Romancer,
Fold But It's Sold That What Molds Him A Cancer
Drowning His Sorrows,
Hounding The Poundings Simply Found In Tomorrows,
Soundings Of Hollows,
Rounding & Clowning Astounding What Follows
real nice man deep as fuck....keep doin ya thing
rythm and schemes are lined up ..like a coke party..dope!!
love da concept and really dug the finshing thoughts....
Unknown In His Home And Alone With His Actions,
Prone To Imagine,
His Zone That He'd Control If Thrown Into Sanctum,
But His Soul Is The Ransom,
A Hole In The Role But The Goal Is The Answer
Chose A Romancer,
Fold But It's Sold That What Molds Him A Cancer
Drowning His Sorrows,
Hounding The Poundings Simply Found In Tomorrows,
Soundings Of Hollows,
Rounding & Clowning Astounding What Follows
real nice man deep as fuck....keep doin ya thing
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Ey thanks for the feed guys no doubt much appreciated, anything you want feeding or any help with anything just get at me with a link or something
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Talk It Over... - Part 1/4
This Is A Horrible Place To Raise Anything, Besides Suspicion,
love that line yo
love that line yo
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