Have You Ever Felt This Way?

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Have You Ever Felt This Way?

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When I was young, I was definitely on some rebellious shit
In high school on that envious and jealous shit
Aggressive on that 2Pac Makaveli shit
Touch me, and you'll get stung like a box jellyfish
I could never live properly, but I had to live
Especially knowing my self-esteem was inadequate
Mad blasphemous in class without the glasses on
Because I felt like I was ugly with them dam glasses on
Insecurities and pretty ass girls
Don't mix like a skunk's dick, and the anus of a squirrel
I blame it on the world, and the creations of man
I blame it on the government, who taking the cash
I blame it on the television, watched by the young
I blame it on bad parents, and every profane tonuge
I contributed to my defeat in very large sums
Wanting someone to believe, but I shoulda been the one
The past is done, and I cannot give up
They say life is a box of chocolate, I call it a box of nuts
Them shits do not melt, when you em open up
You gotta pick em up and eat em, but they hard to crunch
So open your mouth wide, use your jaw and your gums
And grub on every single obstacle that's soon to come
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Re: Have You Ever Felt This Way?

Post by Defiance »

I could never live properly, but I had to live
Especially knowing my self-esteem was inadequate

^ good shit


played subject matter, but non the less it was properly executed for the most part

enjoyed the read man
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Thanks bro!
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Been there before bro... for real
I am the punishment of god.... Had you not Committed great sins, god would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.
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yeah man haven't we all
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