I apply fatigue, its scrutiny to cop with me
apply the gap in the seven seas 'the aftermath is everyone's after me'
apocolyptic amongst this hip-hop hipocerisy
*ill push back ya wig than flee* if you try too step to me
ya Bars aren't heavy like they entered the Odessey!!
my artistry is a-part of me
i can circle the earth with an ounce of my velocity
incohairent with Gore i cause malicousness like trojans in war!!
ya bars leave zzz's like an imbodiment of a bore
face it before you enter the door *ill dis-mantle your mantle & Core*
and it aint even profound as my maxinum force
*Spitting is the subject*
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Re: *Spitting is the subject*
Complex. I see you.
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The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P
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Re: *Spitting is the subject*
It was basic but you can call it complex lol
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Re: *Spitting is the subject*
Thats pretty dope dude...
that was aiight but not enough to showcase ya skillsface it before you enter the door *ill dis-mantle your mantle & Core*
and it aint even profound as my maxinum force
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: *Spitting is the subject*
wow im being slept on.
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thanks flipside really apprciate the comment, you to m33k91
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thanks flipside really apprciate the comment, you to m33k91
Re: *Spitting is the subject*
shits filthy man, i like the rhyme schemes.
Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: *Spitting is the subject*
thanx dude
Re: *Spitting is the subject*
pretty good, tho a couple of extra lines would make it even better.
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