Hey I just joined the site today wanted 2 show y'all a little bit of my written.feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Why isn't marijuana legal,
politicians consider it evil,
but they watch canneval do his stunts,
while you throw me in jail for smokin blunts,
you got 2 grams in the states locked up for 2 months,
comin from bc best chronic anywhere in canada upper class healthcare,
polar bears,and fairs,but it isn't fair how the marijuana is only legalized medically for those who apply have glaucoma or are ready to die,while me i get by,livin life high,upgradin my mind,governments got double standards so sip on your wine,marijuana's considered the equivelant to coc yo it ain't lines,legalize the ganja it will make you stronger didn't you ever sit back and wonder,how somethin that grows in the soil,could cause so much turmoil,im the water in the kettle cuz im startin to boil,im really pissed off,these politicians are soft,sayin you smoke your gunna die while you just cough,cigarettes are legal tho were do they get off,if i smoke a joint i'll be stopped but if you kill yourself in public they just watch,white sticks of death,inhaling poison every breath,i cannot accept,the double standard North America attempts,fightin a drug war wat for drugs comin in plenty off the shore,they say they fight back but they just spend more of the publics money on stoppin me from smoking while its sunny,or even by the ocean it be stunning,but i guess its all about stoppin those who are running,yet i can pop 20 advil with no prescription,please sit back and listen smoke a bowl as the thc glistens,new pieces just christen,marijuana could cure your migraine and stomach problems,glaucoma,loss of appetite,just solves em,why isn't it, legalized,maybe it would be if they looked thru bob marley's eyes,smoked weed no woman no cry,the happiest man dead or alive,smoked ganja didn't tell lies,then theres michael phelps wat can i say,he hit the bong won 8 gold medals a record modern day,then a dolphin named rickay,led the league in rushing with style strength and speed,of course he tested positive for weed,
so now you know it doesnt affect your physical abilities,it only helps you in your hunt for tranquility,
the only reason its not legal is pharmaceutical facilities,claimin to help those with disabilities tryin to up there credibility,they just need stability,wheres there humility,for forcing you to buy instead of getting high,cuz its legalized ,I advise my allies to improvise make these companies reach there demise,
no more handing out pills like fries thats just unwise,at least decriminalize cuz our prisons oversized so many people were just tryin to fly,puffin on their own supply,and lurkin nearby was a cop,i hereby deny smoking even tho i have red eyes,i will defy not comply,treatin me like im drivin dui,while its mid july,fbi settin me up as the fall guy cuz they hired a private eye,all because i dont abide by,the law,this will never be my last hurrah,I wont withdraw,even if harper was an in law,cuz not legalizing weed is the worlds tragic flaw,could bring peace could bring more,the governments stance on green,i deplore.
Legalize it
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Good rap but you Should limit how many bars cause that was alot to read
and yeah legalize it!!!
and yeah legalize it!!!
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ya its a bit too long,but thanks for the feedback.
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I support the subject to the fullest!!!!! Jus better structure in ur bars and ur str8 man. Welcome
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