That Pail of Water Too Heavy!

[JDR]

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ha Aiight..
Str8 Ether


That was a sucky spit, are you nutty kid? Obviously ya buddies is
Cos of a public diss, ya fuckin' click was runnin' like the way a puppy shits!
it must be custom, Rip, like daddy stiches, these niggas shut they lips
& That's a lovely Pic, an Alcholic AND this niggas an UGLY BITCH?
You betta budge or dip if you grudge wit Rip, cos ya response was nothin' sick
& I'm lovin' it, at first he was duckin' fist and now this niggas in front of it!
Fuck ya diss, Derty Shots like my punch was dipped in Muddy Pitts
Get comfy Kidds! cos Im strippin' ya Coach Bear so call this nigga Lovey Smith
Aiight Murks...
All the friends you picked were hoes, my niggas don't pretend or bitch ya know?
We won't Begin to Mention those but it's hard to be A DICK TUFF, so this tha Intervention Show
Yah, ya facts was tasteless, I never ducked any nigga that raps, ya claims missed
So retract ya statements, cos ya lines belong on Broadway, juss Acts & Played Shit
Look at da fags he stays wit, lets battle sonny, promise you wouldn't see a vote
See who ppl Believe in the Most, Jack more Mod than you and I can't even Delete a Post!
& Pls, I don't need a joke, easy folks, look @ how many Vets Rips Ate
I bet tha Kids gay, a Mod? I aint the only one askin' how Plex's Dick Taste
Even his text is bitch made! I hate to defeat a lame bitch
Part 2 has ColorBlynd in lined with a rainbow cos we gon' see the same shit
best Believe ya aint Rip & I just laugh cos ya drops mine
McNasty gets mad at these McDonald personals but used a Jack In the Box Line?????
Thats sad & do NOT rhyme, Collectively Ill, Jack is thru wit rookies
But Murk as the leader is like metal to ya midsections, I guess its cool to Pussies??
& if you niggas choose to push me, bring me any dude, I'll smoke 'em
But Murk need to take the Lebron approach and sit down rather than shoot in the open
ya personals aint enough to judge me, this nigga can either get slugged or duck me
Jack aint neva been scared of any man, especially a nigga from Kentucky!!!!

[Kuhlerblynd]

Ah lol. Nicely done, for someone that used quite a bit of universal lines in this.... The Kuntucky line is personal, but doesnt really hit hard IMO. The Kuhlerblynd bar was tight, how you say the rest of my crew slept on you, and all related references, were done well. The McDonalds line is good. That Plex shit is played as fuck, not really a personal because I dont even talk to duke, but I can see why you put it down and why some others would think its funny. That Intervention line missed badly IMO. Delete a post bar was aight, the one before it, not up to your speed really... I liked the front of the punch line, that was good. Over-all a good drop, but it still seems we're the ones at the fore-front of the lines in this one.... Haha.

[JDR]

Yah. I had fun man. Thx for trading disses back n forth with me. Obviously no beef and never had any. I know you understand that. Either way, up for a collab sometime. PM me a topic and bar limit if you ever interested.

[Orfadox]

Aiight there were a few good bars in this..definatly not the best iv seen from you which disapointed me a little....

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[JDR]

thx 4 readin n feedin

[Quix]

i was thinking the same thing, but i thought if i said it it might seem bias. Thanks TOYH!


JAck, you allready know what ya just did. Funeral March ... LOL Seriouslly though i could quote the whole thing.

hey Murk, why don't you battle Rippa?? Should be hot!

[QwarterZ]

This was pretty good Jack! pretty smooth word play
a lot of nice lines that stuck out for me
the A DICK TUFF thing and a few others
haven't been around to see what sparked this
but it's a pretty good piece from what I've read
still on top of your game!!!!

[Kuhlerblynd]

Lol @ The people getting dissed and crew members trying to intervene talking about "Well it wasn't really that great very sub-par" when it's better than anything any of the crew has ever wrote with little to no effort from Jack. Lol

Had some pretty dope punches in this piece. Couple lol worthy punches as well.

Look at da fags he stays wit, lets battle sonny, promise you wouldn't see a vote
See who ppl Believe in the Most, Jack more Mod than you and I can't even Delete a Post!
& Pls, I don't need a joke, easy folks, look @ how many Vets Rips Ate
I bet tha Kids gay, a Mod? I aint the only one askin' how Plex's Dick Taste

^^
Lol ...

Bodied 'im.

Coming from a dude that hasnt been on site for two mnths or read any other disses, from what I can tell...


But hey, everyone has an opinion!

[JDR]

Thanks for the feed and nothin' really sparked this. Me & Quix thot it would be fun to rep the crew again and this the only other crew on here. So we threw a few shots at them. I aint got no hate for Murk or wouldn't ever have any realistic beef on the internet. Its call bein' bored ha.

[Riggz]

Look at da fags he stays wit, lets battle sonny, promise you wouldn't see a vote
See who ppl Believe in the Most, Jack more Mod than you and I can't even Delete a Post!

haha!