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Re: Catch22- Time

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Mmmm I Dunno Ma... I Kinda Feel The Subject Of Time.. Theres A Couple Good Bars In There Too... Seems Like U More Going For The Energy Which Is Cool.. Cuz Theres Some Difference In The Length Of Ya Bars.. Toward The End.. If U Gonna Record It I Would Like To Read It To The BEat As Well. I Also Did Not Get The Word Nilihism Right Away...
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Re: Catch22- Time

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Yea, I remember having to use some of those words in community college libral philosphy class 101. Sacrates and nilihisim and why the fuck am I here type shit.

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