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Practice Makes Perfect

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I flex fists cross on em connect twists
My knuckles infect lips, youll talk n project lisps
Fire punches ya left crisp and as far as my next gift...
My flows deliver blows like hoes dat collect tips!!!
Lean on em n get tips, high shelf select sips
Now Im buggin as Im pluggin my lyrics infest scripts
I Heard em object sick, These dudes tryna get ripped?
Im piff when I roll on em n blunt wit DIRECT HITS!!
UNH!!
I get lit herb niggas they get da drift
Deadman floating they body left for da fish
You see its 1 2 3 n then i stretch 4 da 5th
Throw up the 6, talk shit,let em rest in da crip/crypt
UNH!!
dispose ya clique throw ya remote in a ditch
gotchu russian undercover on some soviet shit
Spur of the moment shooter Im ginobli wit clips
N i'll rock you in the ring like KOBE WIT GIFTS!!
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dispose ya clique throw ya remote in a ditch
gotchu russian undercover on some soviet shit
Spur of the moment shooter Im ginobli wit clips
thats was dope...
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overall solid verse
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thnx for da feed bump
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nice lil' verse,

"Fire punches ya left crisp and as far as my next gift...
My flows deliver blows like hoes dat collect tips!!!"

dope flow^^, nothing spectacular but good shit for a lil free verse.
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Post by Munteskue1 »

Impressive to stay with a multiple rhyme scheme for so long. Flow was impeccable. Only thing I'd work on is that 1-2-3-4-5-6 line could've hit a lot harder
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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Not exactly punchlines everwhere, but the ones that were are nice. The multi's and flow were on point. I get the feel this was more or less a keystyle, and worth that this piece gets the props it should. Much more to see from you in the future, I'm sure, and I'm waiting to see it. Definitely liked how you closed this one out as well. Upz fam.
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Post by FlipSide »

This Is An Interesting Drop Bro.. Nice Punchlines And Multies There...I Fell Off At The number Line But Other Than That Its A Nice Solid Drop...
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