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Can't Digest.

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He Was Charles The Trouble Maker
Refusing To starve He'd Hustle Paper
Back Pack full Of Peach Games, cheap Vodka N a Couple Chasers
Playing With Greed Like They'd Huddle Later
In The Game Like It Did Him a Humble Favor..
Moms Got Cancer..Charles Asked Why Like 'God Answer
He Waited a Bit And Heard Nothing
His Wheels Swerved Rushing For That Angel Cause it Served Touching
He Swore it Put Affection In Motion..
His Only Love Intake Chemists Weaponed a Potion
He Waved His Family Goodbye n Got Swept By The Ocean
Commitments Great Till You Get Death Out Devotion
Girls Called Him a Old Slob, Turned Alchohalic With No Job
Dignity So Robbed, Walking With a Slow Bob
Praying To No One Hunting Fa Weeks..
Silent Express If U Ask "Who Punched In ya Teeth?"
Ask um what he Earned in the Morning he got Nothing But Sleep
Charles Can't Digest Not Being High Fuck Something To Eat
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Re: Can't Digest.

Post by Riggz »

This was nicely done Ambition. Thug poetry. The last part was your finest
"Praying To No One Hunting Fa Weeks..
Silent Express If U Ask "Who Punched In ya Teeth?"
Ask um what he Earned in the Morning he got Nothing But Sleep
Charles Can't Digest Not Being High Fuck Something To Eat"

good shit.
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Re: Can't Digest.

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The whole thing is fire, real deep and a great story my favorite part is...

"Girls Called Him a Old Slob, Turned Alcoholic With No Job
Dignity So Robbed, Walking With a Slow Bob"

I can picture "Charles" walking down the street with a 40, with girls looking at him with disgust; pretty tight...
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Re: Can't Digest.

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Thanks for the Feed fellaz..
i got you both.
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Haz you always seem to paint a perfect script..one day we'll draw a verse in battle to see who is the better
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Re: Can't Digest.

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I'll be honest. I aint really into reading ish like this, but listening to it on audio would be an entirely different story..

BUT never the less, flow was on point. And yu told the story fairly well. Kept it going with multi's. Pretty dope.

Nice when yu throw in a little imagination...

His Only Love Intake Chemists Weaponed a Potion
He Waved His Family Goodbye n Got Swept By The Ocean

Keep up fam. Nice drop.
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I Was Feelin This Drop Amb your flow was on point and it was just some smooth shit..Good Shit
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Re: Can't Digest.

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Good drop bro, the imagery is good and you stayed consistent on topic with the story and of course the multi's were there. I would like to see this turned into audio, but until then I like this piece as it has a real poetic vibe to it.
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Re: Can't Digest.

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I've seen a "Charles" before...you made me see him again...good stuff.
help a brotha perfect it!
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