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V.I. Bitch

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/untitled-vt13601.html

Y'all Can See How i'm Cripplin Bitches
The Way I Got Em' Spitten Subliminal Disses
I Mean Foreal What Is It With This Kid?
If You Wanna Diss Me, Diss Me
Quickly Stop Bein A Fuckin Sissy
You Wit Me? You Practically Bit Me
An Have Yet To Rip Me, It's Simply
A Fact, Bein Whack Somethin You needa Get Passed
So Come On Dawg We Believe In You HaZ
Pick Ya Mic Up An Let's See What You Have
You Said You Wanted To Battle An Speakin Of That
I'll Even Set The Deadline For a Week An Half
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Re: V.I. Bitch

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u need to rep harder man... im not impressed one bit... its way to short of a diss but what was posted was straight. i think the opener and closer were the best
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: V.I. Bitch

Post by -MenaCe- »

Yea its alittle to short but decent shyt....

nice drop tho homie, short and sweet i guess...lol
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Re: V.I. Bitch

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I Wasn't Thinkin "Hey Lets Impress Ghost", Dick Head..lol It Wasn't Ment To Be A Chapter Either I Told You Guys I'm Just Waiting To Get A Mic, I Was Just Lettin Hazard Know That I Saw What He Dropped An Telling Him To Stop Being Subliminal About Shit An Actually Say What He Wants To Say...But Thanks For The Feed Anyway....
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Re: V.I. Bitch

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aye it aint bad could sound a lot better on audio thought so we'll jus wait it out
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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nice for so short, hopefully haz answers to the call out

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So Come On Dawg We Believe In You HaZ
Pick Ya Mic Up An Let's See What You Have
You Said You Wanted To Battle An Speakin Of That
I'll Even Set The Deadline For a Week An Half

hahahaha thats great!!!! the homie is BACK!!!!! V.I. Muthafucka!!!!!!!!!
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Wack ...Period
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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^^Fag...Period
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Re: V.I. Bitch

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^..Lol Don't Get Mad Cus yo Shit Was Wack Nigga ..
Juss Come Harder Tha Next Time ..
& if U Feel That You Better Than Me Bitch Set it Up Faggot Breath
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Re: V.I. Bitch

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I Never Said I Was Better, I Just Said You Were A Fag...Period
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