Amtrak (Scott James diss)
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Amtrak (Scott James diss)
You're a faggot from Seattle, telling me I'm gay but ain't got heart 2 battle
I'll stay simplistic, let's be realistic, If I was gay I would've blown your mic away, along time ago
(No HOMO)
Thinking of statistics, your rhyming's weak but I remain sadistic
Fucking pessimistic, flow vibes 'positive' like speech optimistic s
Go choke on a Mystic or Gatorade,
I'll laugh, and wave away your diss 2 me
would never be a 'Good shot' like Scottie Pippen's fade away
I'll stay simplistic, let's be realistic, If I was gay I would've blown your mic away, along time ago
(No HOMO)
Thinking of statistics, your rhyming's weak but I remain sadistic
Fucking pessimistic, flow vibes 'positive' like speech optimistic s
Go choke on a Mystic or Gatorade,
I'll laugh, and wave away your diss 2 me
would never be a 'Good shot' like Scottie Pippen's fade away
Last edited by NoVeL on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
normally think yah nice....but this...
NoVeL stay SIMPLISTIC, let's be REALISTIC
If I waz gay I would blown your mic away, along time ago
this IS homo!! no hate doggy, butyah might wanna stay away from the "if i was gay" lines
other than that, Not horrible.
But Scotty WOULD eat that then floss with your intestines Fam!
NoVeL stay SIMPLISTIC, let's be REALISTIC
If I waz gay I would blown your mic away, along time ago
this IS homo!! no hate doggy, butyah might wanna stay away from the "if i was gay" lines
other than that, Not horrible.
But Scotty WOULD eat that then floss with your intestines Fam!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???
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2009 Text diss of the year
2009 Most Hated
2011 Battler Of the Year
and your a good Dick Eater ^^^ ... you ride my nutz harder than your mom ans sister do ^
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???
VERBAL PERFECTION - TEXT DISS OF THE YEAR - 2009
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/verba ... 14181.html
Got a mind of your own: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/got-a ... 24682.html
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/verba ... 14181.html
Got a mind of your own: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/got-a ... 24682.html
In The Hands of the Enemy: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/in-th ... 25031.html
Awards:
2009 Text diss of the year
2009 Most Hated
2011 Battler Of the Year
2009 Text diss of the year
2009 Most Hated
2011 Battler Of the Year
- ScottJames
- Army Of Three
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*yawnz*.......really?
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- Phasewon
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this shit was straight, I picked up the rhyme scheme just fine, although the flow appears to be choppy based on the structure and how it was typed up, but I could tell it would sound ill if you actually spit it. it fell off at the end, but the rhyming aspect was on point up until then, in a diss just try to work on humerous lines, I battle in real life and it's all about clowning on the opponent, funny shit wins people over, the objective is to be entertaining, cause ultimately it's third party prespective who determins the winner of a battle, even though this was just a 'diss', but you should still focus on humiliating your opponent. but this shit was on point with the rhyming factor for the most part, stay at it.
Thanks Guys
I really didnt spend no time on this drop. It didnt make sense 2 sum 1 who wasnt gonna drop in a battle so I just wrote a diss, it was kinda 2 respond 2
ScooterJames (ScottJames) Pussy sh*t. However Phasewon I did read your response & yeah I did write it like I was spittin it live, thanks all of you for your feed bcuz this will make me a better emcee.
- NoVeL
ScooterJames (ScottJames) Pussy sh*t. However Phasewon I did read your response & yeah I did write it like I was spittin it live, thanks all of you for your feed bcuz this will make me a better emcee.
- NoVeL
- Ambiguous Realm
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- ScottJames
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Re: Amtrak Train (ScottJames Diss) LMFAO
LuL... he called me scooter... LUL!!!
WINS:
Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
LOSSES:
Cee4 - 5-3
Cee4 - 5-3
OVERALL:
31-1
Re: Amtrak Train (ScottJames Diss) LMFAO
it was ok man. i kinda picked up the flow
The captaled words kinda ruined it
The captaled words kinda ruined it
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