Amtrak (Scott James diss)

NoVeL · Post by **NoVeL** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:03 am

You're a faggot from Seattle, telling me I'm gay but ain't got heart 2 battle

I'll stay simplistic, let's be realistic, If I was gay I would've blown your mic away, along time ago

(No HOMO)

Thinking of statistics, your rhyming's weak but I remain sadistic

Fucking pessimistic, flow vibes 'positive' like speech optimistic s

Go choke on a Mystic or Gatorade,

I'll laugh, and wave away your diss 2 me

would never be a 'Good shot' like Scottie Pippen's fade away

GrimBlaze · Post by **GrimBlaze** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:36 am

lmao...........erm..yeah...lol

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:39 am

normally think yah nice....but this...

NoVeL stay SIMPLISTIC, let's be REALISTIC
If I waz gay I would blown your mic away, along time ago

this IS homo!! no hate doggy, butyah might wanna stay away from the "if i was gay" lines

other than that, Not horrible.

But Scotty WOULD eat that then floss with your intestines Fam!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:18 am

Your a Good Hype Man Quix

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:57 am

and your a good Dick Eater ^^^ ... you ride my nutz harder than your mom ans sister do ^

ScottJames · Post by **ScottJames** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:31 pm

*yawnz*.......really?

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:16 pm

didnt get the rhyme scheme on this ..
more twisted than something yours truly would right.

Phasewon · Post by **Phasewon** » Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:49 am

this shit was straight, I picked up the rhyme scheme just fine, although the flow appears to be choppy based on the structure and how it was typed up, but I could tell it would sound ill if you actually spit it. it fell off at the end, but the rhyming aspect was on point up until then, in a diss just try to work on humerous lines, I battle in real life and it's all about clowning on the opponent, funny shit wins people over, the objective is to be entertaining, cause ultimately it's third party prespective who determins the winner of a battle, even though this was just a 'diss', but you should still focus on humiliating your opponent. but this shit was on point with the rhyming factor for the most part, stay at it.

NoVeL · Post by **NoVeL** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:26 am

I really didnt spend no time on this drop. It didnt make sense 2 sum 1 who wasnt gonna drop in a battle so I just wrote a diss, it was kinda 2 respond 2
ScooterJames (ScottJames) Pussy sh*t. However Phasewon I did read your response & yeah I did write it like I was spittin it live, thanks all of you for your feed bcuz this will make me a better emcee.

- NoVeL

Phasewon · Post by **Phasewon** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:30 am

^no doubt kid, you should always write your shit to spit it, it defeats the purpose to me if you write some dope shit but couldn't actually spit it in real life, it's basically pointless then. don't fall into the 'textcee' trap, stay doin' you and just keep elevating.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:34 pm

expected more....not really, nice try though..i guess

ScottJames · Post by **ScottJames** » Tue Apr 21, 2009 4:46 am

LuL... he called me scooter... LUL!!!

RainMan · Post by **RainMan** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 10:22 am

it was ok man. i kinda picked up the flow

The captaled words kinda ruined it

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