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Quix
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keyed this up!!!


I 'AIM TO PLEASE' n put 'BRAINS IN KEYS'
n GUTTER like no OTHER
So I 'TRAIN DA G'S'
N my 'RHYMES SOO SICK' that my last 'NAMES DIS-EASE'////
Got 'FAME WID HEAT' so I 'CRUSHIN FAKES'
N 'TOUCHIN MATES' n TOUGH when I STRUT
cuz I'm 'CLUTCHIN GREAT'
N I'll show U-KRANES Like 'RUSHIN STATES'////
Stuff 'FUSSIN LATE' duck cuz I'm 'BUSTIN STRAIGHT'
N I Got da LINES on LOCK like I'm 'TOUCHIN WEIGHT'
Now I'm 'RANKED A BEAST' cuz those'TANKED RETREAT'
N 'PLANK they HEAT' AND I'll 'Strip ya from ya dignity' something like 'PRANKS IN STREETS'///
I'll 'SCORE-IN WEIGHT'
cuz what my Re-CORDIN MAKES''
Platinum, Gold so FOR –SURE I'm GREAT'
Kill fakes like I had a 'MAN TUCK IT/NANTUKIT' like FOREIGN STATES///
Ain't 'TAKE-IN LOANS'
Cuz I know a man dats 'MAKIN PHONES'
I'm like MAFIA BODY SMASHERS the way I'm 'BRAKING BONEZ'
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by NoVeL »

Quix diz shit iz hot!! Wordplay, punchlinez & other sh*t waz great too!! But IMMA leave some Lyrical Crack on da next drop 4 yah.. P.S. i like to battle you guys, cause by yall commentz imma get better.

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Post by Haz »

Yeah U Will Get Better ^ ..

Quix This Shit Wasn't Up To Par...
The Shit Seemed Half Assed In My Opinion
Didnt Like Any Plays In It..
The 'U Kranes' Part Wus Str8
I Feel Like U Forced Alot In Dis Verse
U Betta Step Ya Punch Game Up!!...

Anyways Keep Droppin
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YOUR MOMMA ^


THANKS THO
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