Ammunition (Rell diss)

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Ammunition (Rell diss)

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R-Son-all your rhyming artillery's fatigued

Bet your label 'hit the sheets' after your battle with me

Status Quot looking like Swiss cheese, and you got problems with me?

it ain't my fault if your accountant can't read

Look homie just acknowledge the feed, I'm on the illest site, and your sights ill

even blind men got problems to see

I'm not a Novice I'm NoVeL, and I will get your ship wet like shipwrecks

So 'get the message' like a bottle at sea

I spit the flu, so my lyrics is sick yo

A quick guess is I know you ain't spit yet

Be for-warned my flow is like 6 vets holdin' 6 techs, So be wise, take 6 steps

Plus you and I both know you ain't shit yet

So you can smile or get vexed, after this text, you can retire like Quix said

Not saying he said go home on that note, but if you on Plex boat, we spoke

battles done squashed, he choked

This is uncalled for, callin' me trash, weak ass

you mad cuz you blow 'weed smoke'

So this is as far as we go like fuck you's to masses of people

Your career ended for the birth of NoVeL's new sequel

cuz I'll forever 'stay fly' like American Eagles bitch
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Post by Quix »

ummm...just a thought. R-Son is pretty nice wid the Writtens and disses...you might want to set your sights a lil lower...like on a Newb r beginer.



She wasn't nice at all.


keep at tho, you got potential!




AND LEAVE FEED on OTHERS DROPS, if you would like FEED ON YOURS!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by Haz »

LoL .. Dissin Rell .. Is Like Dissin Hazard ..
It's Not A Happy Endin ..

Anyways This Was Basic .. U Capped Stuff That Didnt Need To Be Capped...
Work On Punchlines.. Multis.. FLow.. Wordplay.. Nameplay.. Etc...

U Have Potential.
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Post by ugly »

damn whats with people and structure??? fix ur bars homie. till then i cannot read this its all mis-match
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