Title Deed (Complexity diss)

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Title Deed (Complexity diss)

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Who the fuck is Complex? The solution's simple

I'll tear your fan base down like Coney Island projects

This dude's from Milwaukee, are you serious? Dawg SHUT UP & eat ya broccoli

I didn't wanna fight, but you got on the site 2 stop me,

my punch lines wit the pen 'draw close' like small blows traded with rocky

Young nigga, average build, not short or stocky

Like blackheads you're going to have a hard time trying to pop me

I knock beats like gym class or classroom top seats

Your girl wasn't convinced with your confidence, so she measured my 9 inch, 2 see if I was cocky

Yo Complex, I'm on the illest site fam

your like a black scratch on a paper that's white man

Your lyrics will get blown away like a pillar of white sand

and your bitch made, oh shit your a nice man, so is it appropriate 2 call you a dike man

So say goodnight to night man, I run shit from NY to Iceland

if your King of The Hill, take a hike man

So chill on the hype man, and count 2 thirty one

cuz you sound twenty eight which is a light gram
Last edited by NoVeL on Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:18 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Uppin some feed like infants on WIC

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Ok, I'll leave feedback on both of these drops tomorrow if you don't drop anymore. I'm retired and I responded via shoutbox as much as I am going to.

Props for keeping yourself active, but DAMN.

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Re: Title Deed (Get at me CoMpLex Pt II)

Post by complexity »

NoVeL wrote:I said it before & imma say it again!!

Who da f**k is complex? The solution's simple, I'll tear your fan base down like/ Coney Island Projects. This dude's from Milwaukee, Are You Serious? His state alone sounds weak, Dawg SHUT UP & eat cha broccoli.

I love broccoli and I'm from Maine.

I didn't wanna fight, but you got on the site 2 stop me, my punch lines wit the pen DRAW CLOSE like/ small BLOWS traded with rocky. Young nigga, average build not short or stocky, like/

Best part of the drop.

pimples you goin to have to use your nails tryin to pop me. I knock beatz like/ gym class or classroom top seats. Your girl wasn't convinced with your confidence, so she measured my 9 inch, 2 see if I waz cocky!!

That was kind of funny.

YO CoMpLeX, I'm on da illest site fam, your like/ one black scratch on a whole paper that's white man. Your lyrics will get blown away like they on a pillar of lite sand & your additude's bitch made oh sh*t I forgot your a nice man, so iz it appropiate 2 call you a dike man??

Boring.

So say Goodnight to the Nightman. I run shit from NYC all the way into the iceberg's in Iceland & if your King of The Hill, then go take a hike man!!

Boring.

Oh yeah so chill on the hype man & count 2 thirty-one, cuz you sound twenty eight which in my eyez iz considered a lite GRAM.

What?

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Overall. 6/10, the other drop was better.

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