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Ayy Jesodist .. Jusa warm up

Post by Brah-Vo »

[align=center]This dude, crying everytime he lose a battle
Probably coz he lose a dime everytime he lose a battle
so hes abit poor, gotta strive to work hard to keep his feet warmer,but still livin in a shanti hut
Talkin like he can survive in deep water, but his home is the pond like all his "fans be ducks" (yup !)
Anyone else sick of this kid? He feel as if he's obliged to bitch
This guy complain so much maybe hes the one that rides the dick (haha!)
But maybe i shouldnt really mind the kid why should i waste my time
i'll leave this kid sour like he taste a lime
Maybe he gay as his cousin? Hold on lemme copy and paste this Line:
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Time Line wrote:Arvincible??
to me like ur like a beggar, Unconvincible, to the public never visible
i break ur spines, im timeline, come near me and get pinched like a porcupine,
Arvincible talk a lot of shit, my mouth on his dick leave him with a taste of picnic, [font=Arial Black]yeah suck on my meat,[/font] i cum on ur sheets while ur bitch leave me so ejaculated ill be needing new cheeks!!!

[align=center]I dont think jes should keep rapping about strappin a gat
Coz i betchu right now hes probably fapping to that ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^[/align]


Shut ya fake ass Up ! I only really need 5 Bars to son u. eat some humble cake. dont act like u run this place. You gives respect then you get respect. That aint dickridin either.
This just a warm up kid ! Get at me if you want more. Bitch!

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Post by Kurse »

LMFAO...dayuuuuummmmm...

Lil RAI shittin on sum niggaz! haha

I luv it...I think '09 is gonna be alriiiiight!

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Post by Omega Bill »

Look at Raiza gettin' his shit together.

Atta boy.

Good shit man.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Pretty Decent ..
Shoulda Came Harder On Tha Punches Fam
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Jesodist »

Whats up with my name in this WHACK scripture?
Oo
^^
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FULL OF SNITCHES AND BITCHES WHO DICK RIDE IN BUNCHES.

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Post by Haz »

Reply To It then ..
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Post by Jesodist »

bitch in the 'bucket' flip, holla at me so 'fuck it' i'd have her in my lap teachin her to'duck it' stragiht pacifist how i dont believe what half this whack 'rapper spit' lil suger coated bitch!!!.. getting personal and shit? every forrum highlighting the word 'dick?!?!'step and get ya wrapper split!! naw this wont cost me a 'dime' just my 'time' along with piece of my 'mind' this reply is a win, but still puts me 'behind' fucking around with lowlife like R.A.I an his 'kind!!'against me grow a mustache before you 'rhyme!!'
I'm tha right artist that'll fight 'darkness'R.A.I has been 'garbage' since his lives 'started!!'See ya can't bite 'carnage' wit yo light 'harness' Till ya light hearted, then I'll host a site 'harvest'i devour galaxies with 'madness' how dare you challenge me with that 'sadness!!'

Quick freestyle. You can all just say who was better and end of discussion.
OR grow some balls, respond and let this be a never ending battle bitch you choose.
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Post by Haz »

R.I.A. Came better
more punch Attempts.
Better multis , jus a Overall better Diss,
Jes you gotta Learn How to Grasp The Concept of Rippin niggas Heads off
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Post by Time Line »

[font=Comic Sans MS] [/font]Jeso came up with some good shit
but R.A.I came up highlightning "A DICK"
Timeline has haters like fans
like Arvincible and R.son
fuck these snitches
i leaves them dead on the porch with no reason for stiches!!!
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Post by Jesodist »

This dude, crying everytime he lose a battle
Probably coz he lose a dime everytime he lose a battle

that was some weak fucking punch^^^^^like some played out shit caz people always be saying this shit. Played out.

Anyone else sick of this kid? He feel as if he's obliged to bitch
This guy complain so much maybe hes the one that rides the dick (haha!)

another ^weak fuckin punch unless people hate me they would consider this
punch.

But maybe i shouldnt really mind the kid why should i waste my time
i'll leave this kid sour like he taste a lime

this isnt even worth mentioning^ clearly hazard must be joking.^
Oo
^^

your whole verse was rambling thrash bro no disrecpect i didnt even want to answer with that free. Its actually surprising your rap skills are still basic as fuck when you been here so lon. What a shame!

continue spitting bitch you already started shit, i'll continue replying. Dont come up with no bitch talk this time. Be lyrical and creative.
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Post by - Mutual - »

okay why dont ya battle it out
when RAI wins i mean... lol
whoever wins can shit all over the other one
an be done with this beef
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Jesodist »

Well it would be easy in a normal battle ground. I am daring him to battle me in this scripture as a never ending battle. Meaning he drop then me and so on. That way we can see who really is the best. I am waiting for his drop so i can drop another response.
THIS SITE IS AN EMBARASSMENT
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Post by The Gonz »

That fappin line was hilarious and eclipsed anything Jeso said. By the way, whats up with TimeLine posting pics in every thread?

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Post by ScottJames »

the diss was iight
too basic imo..
but was well put together
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WINS:
Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
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Cee4 - 5-3
OVERALL:
31-1

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Post by Jesodist »

Come on bitch ass kid spit!!
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