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Illattic - First Verse
Fame - Second Verse - Aka Fame

She carries dildos everywhere that she goes ||
even though she knows that shell release flows ||
she blows taking in more loads then clothes ||
i don't know what to do about these hoes ||
i asked F.A.M.E if he wanted to make an ill song ||
about this bitch that gets low like lil jon ||
he was like u know its on, unlike her thong ||
i was like OH NO, thats fucking wrong ||
id hate to diss a natural "fucking blonde" ||

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Your lines consist of bullshit and nothing more//
A stuck up palace whore//
Probably suck dick to get a discount at the dollar store//
Bitch you's a lien slut//
I'll cut your guts,while you taste my nuts//
No 1 wants to hear you speak so tape it shut//
Only attention you get is if i rape your butt//

"its hard to cut a deal with a slut appeal"
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lmao alot of this shit made me laugh, in a good way," i asked F.A.M.E if he wanted to make an ill song ||
about this bitch that gets low like lil jon || " lol good one

lol fame had a funny one too "Probably suck dick to get a discount at the dollar store// "
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"Is that slut an illestlyrics MC?"


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It was done in like ten minutes, but thanks for the feed
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Yeah we killed that shit
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Post by precise »

lol, not bad, the posts good for a laugh for sure
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hahaah, thanks for the feed
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this was a nice piece plex...a nice funny vibe around it
made me laugh...nice little drop
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This ish made me laugh fo'real.
Sic flow, substance was bonkers!

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