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Keystyle of concerns

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Daily I see mouths Poppin'-Off, but when death's close they Stoppin'-Soft,
Occasionally dudes claim Top-N'-Boss, until a tool make em' Drop-N'-Cough,

I be myself, some on a Act-Scene, wear grills so no Plaque-Seen,
and claim they had a Strap-Scream, some yall thinkin' "That's-Mean!",
naw just part of the Vaccine, keep the method moving like a Track-Team.

I feel to think More-Deep-Now, as I grip this liquor and Pour-Heaps-Down,
Gazing into a farm, concerned for life forms like ain't you got Sore-Feet-Cow?

Fuck it, Tired-of-Caring, I know the demons look but I Admire-the-Staring,
down below a Fire-is-Flaring, so damn close that the Wire-is-Tearing.


I don't know, drunk and high and just felt the need to write some random shit off my head, lol.
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wasnt bad couldnt get hold of the flow
the multies werent bad good enough tho
not much more i can say other than this wasnt a bad keystyle
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Yeah man no worries, I was trashed last night. xD
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