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What You Got To Do With it #1

Post by complexity » Wed Mar 21, 2018 10:16 pm

5 years since my last one, give me a break.

(stop at the inners for a pause, fell off towards the end, but i feel the beginning was strong)

As if I’m so villainous for you're complete willingness/
To pull my heartstrings like a ventriloquist/
Darling you’re not worth the sterling on your wrist/
I kind of wish you were burnin in a pit/
Of fire, I wouldn’t reminiscence of one moment of you're turbulence/
I’d rather be a virgin than continue this downward trip/
By the way I threw you're favorite flowers off a cliff/
Now I wonder why I ever spent one hour showering you with gifts/
I didn’t realize I was powerless to a self obsessed talentless/
Malicious houndin bitch that would never amount to shit/
I should have thrown the towel in, you would be louder than you would flip/
hoot and holler like a child as if you were six/
Jesus you ruthless bitch, you put me through hell with you're loopy fits/
I just want a future with you removed from it/
I’m working on life improvement and you're too stupid to exist/
So how about you find another loser the sooner you can kiss/
I hope you don’t think I care about the rumor list/
I find it humorest, the same people you would bitch and be rude to/
You decide to recruit to netflix, and hulu, that’s what you do/
if I was still fruit loops, I’d be pissed, but you made your final mistake/
and we ain't hitched, now you're a line, a rhyme on a tape/
a problem fixed, a bad time in a place/
someone that I decided to diss, another vagina I hate/
I hope every crime that you make flies in your face/
like a fist, thanks to these unmentioned names/
I am not at risk of you're constant self centered ways/
that won't be missed you're a resentful prick take center stage/
until the end of days you're blip on my radar, a mental haze/
an eclipse, a once in a life time mistake that I won't make for a bit/
save me a kiss in heaven I'm going to hell so I ain't taking you with/

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Re: What You Got To Do With it #1

Post by NoVeL » Tue Sep 24, 2019 2:18 pm

I didn’t realize I was powerless to a self obsessed talentless/
Malicious houndin bitch that would never amount to shit/
I should have thrown the towel in, you would be louder than you would flip/
hoot and holler like a child as if you were six/
Jesus you ruthless bitch, you put me through hell with you're loopy fits/
I just want a future with you removed from it/
I’m working on life improvement and you're too stupid to exist/
So how about you find another loser the sooner you can kiss/
I hope you don’t think I care about the rumor list/
I find it humorest, the same people you would bitch and be rude to/
You decide to recruit to netflix, and hulu, that’s what you do/


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Re: What You Got To Do With it #1

Post by NoVeL » Tue Sep 24, 2019 2:35 pm

I didn't realize It'd be real wise to wheel by our trust issues, they'd fuck with you in still life.
The bitch dumped a bunch of unethical clumps. Another will sampled by fiendish games membrane tissues drugged in tear jerkers, sucks we got played ill. We should've thrown the towels we showered in, for at least the hour in the bathtub. I remembered the sour scowls we'd brag of. At least you never took shit back, I never looked back at our past love as their hands gave shitty back rubs. I was married once what became of our future? You spend the days you claimed you worked for pay and nights you drove away in a Uber. It was common sense I felt cheated. You repeatedly were picked up as cheaper but enjoyed the affair for copper. I watched her leave inside I was slightly slighted but let it slide. Besides, I promised the doppelganger I would avenge myself as ghost and writer suicidal notes.


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