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2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 18th, 2011
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Goodluck

i already foreseen this.

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AntiMaTTer

Punchs leave ya DOME CRACKED and Bitch ya SO-WACK ITS YA BIRTH TRAIT...
This Kid Should KNOW THAT, PS: Light, FUCK YOU!i didnt wana do ya COL-LAB IN THE FIRST PLACE!..(sup quix)
Just 4 lines will Rattle and Shatter this FAGS SOUL thatll BEAT AN SLICE HIS FACE IN...
So just call this Battle with Matter a BLACK HOLE! cuz you aint SEEING LIGHT ESCAPING!!...


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Enlightend

kids nuts? yes.. so i guess he sucks-seeds.. but he's far from a success,
this punk says he's anti-matter and thats ironic cus i couldnt give a fuck less

and i spit mean at ur bitch team, his king ducked now this queen gets dealt soon
cus for anti i spell doom yep light'll put an end to A.M. like it was twelve noon

Might as well get the votes going. These two are on very even skill levels, in my opinion, so this was a hard battle to judge. Antimatter definitely took the multis, but Enlightened edged out the flow a little bit. In all categories, it was either a tie or very close. They both had two hard-hitting bars (Antimatters 2nd and enlighteneds 1st) but i'ma give this battle to Enlightened because of a more creative name flip and harder punches.

Imo,almost everything was a tie... Anti your 1st bar was basically a statementish personal.. No hit..last bar was a nice nameflip off light.

Light your first bar was also a weak flip off concept... Second bar made it up tho..

With that said both had good flow.and the only thing that separated each other was multis..

Mvgt anti... For using more complex multis in his end rhymes... thats how close this ish was..

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MVGT: ANTI

Thought Anti had the better bars. Wasn't feeling the Success/suck seed line from Light as much as the other 3 bars in this battle. So therefore, i used that to determine the vote. Anti takes this with his bars being more effectiver, consistant, and a lil harder over all.

Good lil battle though. 1

Light got more punches in there. Anti's punches were really good but he had filler set-ups. Light had wordplay in every line. Anti had better multies and still kept a decent flow. Light's flow was good, too, though his multies were simpler.

+1 Enlightened

2-2

my words the type that never will fumble...
but good job light, didnt think id see you at the end of the tunnle.

lol good battle

Flow -enlightened
enjoyment- tie
punches-anti
multis-anti
MVGT- Anti matter


Close battle my type of text battle short ranged and good read

anti barely edged him with better punches

enlightened shit was awesome too


good battle fellas

i liked lights A.M punchline shit was dope but for me antimatters blackhole one was better, but punch for punch i'd call it a draw Enlightend had more but anti's hit harder,
i enjoyed both equally, both flowed well and had multi's.

im gonna vote for Enlightend, based on his opener it flowed niiiice, it was funny well worded an it hit effectively,i've heard a similair line used to a british rapper but imo light's was worded better anyway dope battle.

Mvgt = Enlightend.

Oooh .. a tough one to pick out. For me, I see more from Enlightend in terms of punchlines compared to Anti, but I see more consistency from Anti, I wasn't felling the first line from Enlightend. They were good overall, but when it came to what was more hard hitting, I would say Anti was stronger, that last line from Anti was very effective, I also liked Enlightend's last line, but it wasn't as hard hitting for it to be considered as a winning performance. Both their verses flowed pretty nicely, can't fault them on that. I found Enlightend's verse more enjoyable, especially after reading the second line, it was pretty funny. Anti brought a personal, which was something I didn't expect in a 2 bar round, but it was kinda effective, not something that would bring a crowd reaction IMO. But after looking back repeatedly, I'll give this to Anti cuz IMO he was consistent, there wasn't any line dragged his two bars back .. but Enlightend started off with a line that wasn't keeping his verse consistent. If he had a better line, I wouldv'e given it TO Enlightend .. but Overall ... MVGT AntiMatter

finally...this took forever to get voted on cause of the recent crashes glad its out the way. good battle light, guess that one was a toss up.



whhy the fuck aint this closed and updated?? we DO have more than 1 mod dont we?